waist to thin ... neck to fat ... hes crosseyed
hes too tall
needs shorte legs
Get a better ref pic ... and actually match it to your model .... dont just randomly pull parts a model
placed ... that model's whole body looks like a deformed cylinder ...
Highlite the belt area ... extrude ... and scale up ... vwala ... a real belt and not many added polys....
not to mention is legs need to be thikened.... and chest shhrunk ... just a weee bit tho... other than all that its not half bad.
oooh and one last thing ... Anime kids have abnormally enormous heads ..so make his head bigger. like in your origional ref pic