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[The_Real_Legend]

I took the advice Deuce gave me and repaired my photoshop cd
so now I've uploaded two more versions of my cover.

WITHOUT GLOW

obviously WITH GLOW(might need some improvements)

So what do you guys think. With or -out
Or should I add something else or maybe lose sometin.
You named it.

oh and an earlier version of my cover can be found in a previous post.

 

[Bolteh2]

u should do smoother lines and colorings, cuz atm it looks like you just scanned pencil drawing, sharpened/darkened lines up and overlayed it to a scren capture of a dbgt episode, it really looks ugly to the eye

 

[The_Real_Legend]

u should do smoother lines and colorings, cuz atm it looks like you just scanned pencil drawing, sharpened/darkened lines up and overlayed it to a scren capture of a dbgt episode, it really looks ugly to the eye

so what should i do about it?
be a little more exact

 

[Bolteh2]

read tutorials on how to get smooth lines and how to have a good coloring technique

 

[Naz]

euhm.. did you draw those two pictures or?

 

[The_Real_Legend]

euhm.. did you draw those two pictures or?

Yes I did all handddrawn and inked and then coloured with ps
you can find the noncoloured one in one of my earlier threads.

 

[Death The Jedi]

I think it looks pretty nice.. the one without glow is better. I don't know anything about coloring pictures in PS.. so maybe it really does suck or something, but from what I know how to do, it's really nice.

 

[X-iT_W0uN|)]

Looks much better than the no-colour ones I like the glow one (That ship still looks like a hotdog to me)

 

[The_Real_Legend]

Looks much better than the no-colour ones I like the glow one (That ship still looks like a hotdog to me)

I aggree it looks a bit hotdogish but I really don't mind. Its not like I can change it because it already looks like that in the manga.
Sorry to dissapoint you but the ship will remain a hotdog.

 

[The_Real_Legend]

I've just gone and put the glowy one on the cover cause I'm satisfied with.
I know it could be alot better but I don't want to waste nemore time on this so I can continue my manga.
I'll just try to do it better next time.

 

[MinesSkylineR34]

saving as jpg isnt that bad? 56k is gonna die
the glow on the goku in the second one doesnt fit to me other than that id say its good