Well, it's o.k but not that great. I don't really like the way piccalo was blended, it just looks like he was put their and you just changed the opacity. And that bg is pretty much the same as your other ones except it has like fart gas or something over it.
i just dont want anyone to discourage him. cause i got a few bad feedbacks when i was starting out and i wanted to quite. i didnt mean the nazi bum thing, i just thought of it real quick and liked it and then used it. nothing personal.