It is good, only suggestion is maybe add some different effects to the 3D stuff. Like make it in 3DSMAX then put it into PS and edit it a bit just put in some cool effects mixed in with the 3d shiot it'll rockz0rz
none the less its a very excellent first try with 3DSMAX, so good job man
yep looks top. the BG and text are cool. but I would remove the cloud image. or blend it in way better (no cutting, but layer masking, or ofcourse change layer blending mode, into overlay mebbie). but it looks v. nice.
I like the simplicity of it. I don't think the typeface works, and I really don't see the point of the barcode, but visually the rest is interesting. To be honest I don't think you need to do anything other than make the type stronger.