its not because its his first that he cant get crits.. he learns more of what i said than what you said.. thats the problem with this forum, everybody is god, eventho most of those models have lots of glitches
i think i make the model more high poly my and som of my frindes are making a movie with the model but if somone will reskin the model, just pm me..! the arms whats wrong with them.. i like the show me what wrong so i can try fix them
thx for the critz but i am not to clewer so.. if you can show me whats wrong i try fix it
btw i just following my ref.. and it look like it it cant be more like it so plz tell me whats wrong
calm down dude. i think in this case it's just helpin sumone who wants to learn it so you gotta compare to his past work not the standards in modelling. critin harsher doesn't mean better. just telling him that he gotta redo all the skin doesn't help him. but you're right about those forums (except in this case).
i still wanna see front side and back pics to crit the muscle structure and such.
there.. + i just noticed the side view of the wrists and hands.. scale those up.. wrist and hand should flow into eachother.. your wrist and hand look like 2 different parts
use davidskiwans(sp?) dbz arm ref in the ref thread. and here's a major hint you should follow: look at alot of pics of the char you wanna model. then start to simplify the shape in your imagination (just the main features and those who give the actual shape). now model...sounds simple but...
when i look at your model it feels like you didn't do it like that. i looks like you just started and went on how it came. it really helps when you follow that method. look at dendza's models. he almost overperfectionated that method(like uber lowpoly).
try to think about what i said. you'll improve faster then with such a mess. and i see potential in your model.
AND REDO THE SHOULDERS FOLLOWIN BOLTEH'S REF!!!!(without using a sphere )
the scar is fine, i thin the atonomy is fine. Its perfect for a Game. But if this is for something like a "portfolio" thing to score 3d jobs, then yes theres many things that can be fixed. But its Perfect for esf, the scar especially doesnt have to be changed, its perfect as is.
lol alle love my scar.. ^_^ i think i will realease it for esf... maby but i need som help to do it and a host.. and i need to fix som bug on the modle ^_^
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Update.. here com the last update to night, i will go to bed now. I have tryed to fix the arm & shulder problem.. give critz!!
i need one to show me to make so hands
well i'm new to modeling too and i kinda liek dbz (havn't seen alot) anyway the pants look wired and when i saw tein he was wider in the pants and the head was longer in the back(side view)
I have no time more tp model i have my school to look after so.. it is the end of the model.. maby i will realese it have a new skin to it allready.. but just if i have time
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