Hi the n00b is back with a tien Model..! give critz

[Zarp]

i have deleted the SSJ3 model!! of goku and started to model Tiensinhan!! give critz!!:] i thing it is going great but what do you guys thing..!

 

[GaZeeBo]

his torso is too much backwards and there is something wrong about his feet

 

[Zarp]

the feet is to big i know..! an i will fix the torso

-------EDIT---------

here is a update!!

 

[RoshkoMasta]

his upper pants looks overpolied, might be just the confusing view of the backfaces

 

[Zarp]

it has meny polys around 288 poly ( thats alle included shous san the yello think)

 

[PiXel]

Wow u used A Group O_O
Then the Legs look they should be but to many polys O_O
And the upper body look **** -.-
Bad! But u even a Noob as u tell ^^ As i know the 3rd or the second model? O-o?
Well not bad for N00b ^^

 

[Almighty_Gir]

omg he skins better than i do

i wouldnt call you a noob, a newbie would be better to describe (anyone else read the differences??)
you show a big chance to improve and be one of the more skilled modelers on the forum. just visit websites like polycount, and 3dtotal (not posting links cos i think ill get my ass kicked for that :S) and study things like polyflow

 

[ray_1301]

Zarp: just keep practicing and watch where ur polies are going, just dont use millions or 10. Aim for 1500 as its about average. Also dont just model dbz stuff, try a range of things.

GiR: Like i said gir, just try it, it aint too hard.

 

[Zarp]

omg he skins better than i do

i wouldnt call you a noob, a newbie would be better to describe (anyone else read the differences??)
you show a big chance to improve and be one of the more skilled modelers on the forum. just visit websites like polycount, and 3dtotal (not posting links cos i think ill get my ass kicked for that :S) and study things like polyflow

Thx man try studie now..! ok i an not a n00b skinner i am pretty good a it..! i have pratis a lot! lol... so! hehe

Zarp: just keep practicing and watch where ur polies are going, just dont use millions or 10. Aim for 1500 as its about average. Also dont just model dbz stuff, try a range of things.


GiR: Like i said gir, just try it, it aint too hard.

ok i try.. but i will tjek the site Almighty_gir have given to me..!

But Thx a lot

 

[Bolteh2]

he has tumors on his chest and stomach..

what?... oh... those are muscles



get better polyflow cuz atm it looks like randomly placed polies

 

[Goten9]

try to make the scar longer :smile:
But good work

 

[ReCkOninG of FirE]

i realy liked your first ssj3 goku model although it had a few problems...anyway nice work for a noob, theres something about him i can't put my finger on though..

 

[Zarp]

i realy liked your first ssj3 goku model although it had a few problems...anyway nice work for a noob,..

thx man!!

hmm do som know a good toturial to learn a right polyflow

 

[Damaera]

Look's Pretty good but..

 

[jowhacker]

try using like lots of ref pictures it helps

 

[guest]

Look's Pretty good but..

its his scar.

 

[Damaera]

Ah, Try to make it more realistic instead of one line across his chest

 

[Zarp]

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!

Sorry i havent posted a long time but here is a hell of a update give critz i have redone the model totaly the polycount is 1523..!

i need one to skin the face for me

thx to the one there have made my ref i dont know his name.. so if somone know plz tell me!

 

[Bolteh2]

nt only the face needs a skin.. the whole model could use a reskin tbh =$

the model aint the best either, lots of wasted polies and weird proportions (thos arms man !!!

 

[Mario Ana]

that's a biiig improvment. :yes: especially the pants' mesh is much cleaner now. i'd like to see a full front side and backview to give better crits.

//EDIT: it's his first bolteh