Hey, my brother needs good criticism on his short movie:

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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WlQpBJp0gnc

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My brother makes a bunch of short movies and he's going into film industry thing soon to be making commercials, and this was one movie he's been buggering me about for a while.

So, I'm wondering, can anyone here can give good criticism about it and help him? Like, what's good, what sucked, bad camera angles, music choices etc.

Don't talk about acting, his friends help him with his movies lol.
 
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I smiled. Didn't expect that at all.
 
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I wonder who just saw Iron Man :O!

It was pretty good but some parts were overly long. Like the first minute could of been 10-20 seconds at most.
 

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Only one I can think of is at 0:34 where the camera could've easily done a slightly longer rotate to the main characters face and save an additional shot from being used.
 

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