Heaven's Flames

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Heaven's Flames



its still a WIP, but i need some comments to add or remove please help.
Crits and comments are welcome
 
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it looks pretty damn good, but i think your composition would be 100x better if u put the pic of the girl further down the pic, at the moment, we look from the top right to the bottom left and the text isnt really doing anything, if u pull down the girl so the text is slightly touching or close to touching it will mean out eyes leave the picture at the correct corner the bottom right... its difficult to explain but i hope ive helped =]

also if it were up to me, i'd increase the opacity/saturation around the girls eyes, just slightly, so it will give a nice focal point, if you have a picture with someones eyes directly looking at the camera, then usually catches peoples attention, but at the moment that attention is being waisted because she's too faint... give the eye's something to hook onto ^_^
 
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thnx david, you always give these good comments !

ill do my best !
 
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for some reason I think if you removed the shapes on the 2 corners, it would look better. with just the nice pic of the girl and the nice font.
 

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