haven't posted here in a while..

[Jehuty187]

Just wondering what you guys think. I know alot of you around here are really improving

 

[Jakut]

You really should work on your newfound style. There are far too many visible blocky pixels, try either bluring them out or to make them sharper somehow and is that a magnetic(polygon) lasso i see?

 

[Mr.Lukyas]

Make softer that green colour.

 

[elNarr]

It looks too sharp. Could you try to put those green 'lines' away or atleast replace with red? I'd like to see how it'd look like that.

 

[Sicron]

Get rid of the pen-tool lines, and you're winner! They kinda disrupt the flow of the sig IMO.

 

[Jariroth]

Try using the same colour sceme that the render has and whats with the pen tool lines? I've never really been a fan of this style though, too abstract...

 

[Sicron]

I think the pen tool is a part of his style, He also did it before with a Magic Lasoo, just took a screenshot of it. Not many people are a fan of it though, it just looks misplaced.

 

[Keiha]

I think it's got too much going on in it for my taste. But then again, I shouldn't talk. I'm about as simple as it gets with signatures.

 

[MF29]

The render is wrong, the focal color is red which throws everything off, the effects are nice but if the render color matched everything else, the signature would be fine.

 

[-Origin]

Agreed. There's too many colours in there. The effects on their own and the composition are good, just get rid of the colours.

 

[Jehuty187]

I think the pen tool lines look cool.

KK, hows this ?

 

[Mr.Lukyas]

Still, the purple is too sharp.

 

[MF29]

Change the purple to a color from the render.

Or at least change that pen tool shape to a clipping mask, then blur the surrounding effects and background to add depth.

 

[Sicron]

The purple/pink clashes with the rest of the signature, personally, I would change those parts to a color in the range of #f5eda3. But that's just my opinion.