Guess whose back... back again?

[Suh Dude]

Slim is back, ftw! (well not really back cause I'm bored to death)

Model by Friskie, DBZ Hell, or anyone else who did the gotenks model.

It's a WIP so I need help looking for a full body and face reference, and some crit to accomplish this task

 

[Ramunas]

Hello, the skin tone is a bit too darky, make some highlights on it and the eye pupils are way too big + the eye shape is not really correct. But the hair is nicely done. Good job so far man, keep it up.

 

[Suh Dude]

The pants are not mine (the original pants) but is edited by me. I probably spent an hour on the legs trying to figure out how to make it realistic and I got bad results so default pants it is... ^_^

 

[final shine]

well it looks good for now, but just add a lil more highlights and shadows to the cheaks and lips, and for the eyes, just bring the exteriour corner of the eye more to the interior , oh and the vest needs to be a tad more blue ,hope it helps ^^

 

[Synth]

You should probably lose the dark shading under his eyes... he looks really tired.

 

[Suh Dude]

Uh, I think I need to do some edits to the body and the arms. Then I'll start finalizing everything ;D

 

[Ramunas]

Well, I think you should still fix the face color tone (it's hard to see it from such perspective picture give front shot) and the eyes shape.

 

[Suh Dude]

Well, I think you should still fix the face color tone (it's hard to see it from such perspective picture give front shot) and the eyes shape.

 

[Ramunas]

Well did you some drawover plus reference.
Hope this helps.

 

[elcor]

in your drawover gotenks is angry(furius).the eyes of lith is good.sorry english

 

[Ramunas]

in your drawover gotenks is angry(furius).the eyes of lith is good.sorry english

Then show me any character of dbz that has such eyes with angle of 90 degrees! It doesn't matter if he is serious or not, the shape of the eyes is (angle) the same as in the refence unless he is opened his eyes wide and still its more then 90 degrees!

 

[Suh Dude]

I need some help with the arms lol, especially the back of the arms.

The pants are not mine, once again X_x

 

[final shine]

the skin is oversharpend ._. , well, show a pic with the uv map, maybe someone can make a easy patern on the back of the arm , forearm, and sholders should look like

 

[Suh Dude]

 

[final shine]

this should work ^^

 

[Suh Dude]

That helps a lot

Sorry no nipples... unless you really want to see nipples o.o

Edit: is it me or is ssj Gotenk's skin lighter then the normal Gotenks? I think I'm tripping out... o_o

 

[Neon]

Wow, very nice. I'm not a huge fan of the SSJ hair though. It doesn't seem to match his eyebrows, and the darker parts of the hair is too dark imo.

And yeah the SSJ form does look a tad lighter than the normal form.

 

[Suh Dude]

I think I remember you

Yeah, I'll fix the hair and eyebrows xS

 

[Tenzo]

i think it's pretty good!

 

[The_Real_Legend]

Lith it turned out pretty good
but how did you make those nice renders in that last pic. I'd like to now.