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First befor you crit me this is my first real bit of art and so that why it isnt something out of this world but still crit it tho :D
 

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Very plain.. You need something in the top left corner. I give it a... 7/10
 
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put somthingin the top right, then itll be good right now its too empty, i like the fx you used though
 
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hmm fairly basic, n it kinda hurts my eyes but i guess you like these things kept simple ye??
i fink theres 2 much attention to the left corner, n u should try n add something in the top right...
 
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i saw, if u wanna make it abit better, take the text and lines and move it to the uper right...might help abit :)
 
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I do like the effect that you used, but you need to work on your text part more, maybe even put it in the blank part. Find something that looks good and balanced.
 
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Well first thanks for the crits and i will do something about the top right and thanx again :D
 
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omg too blurry X_x


would go blind looking at that for a while
 
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Did you mean for it to say GotenksOwz, or is that a typo o_O?

Oh well, It's good for a first.
 
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actually i like it...

you can just do some more stuff witht the typography making it look cooler and id be great
 
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Kwel thanx man i am gonna do an other piece soon its just finding the time to make it thats all :D
 

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