Gokussj WIP

New Member
Joined
Apr 28, 2004
Messages
66
Best answers
0
Hi, i made this about month ago and now i decided that i can finish it.Some good drawovers would be great. there are 2775 polygons and 4651 Tris and it doesnt matter to this model how many polys it will have making just for fun...

here are some screens...

credits to Mr. phonso for letting me use his hairs...









and wire...

 
New Member
💻 Oldtimer
Joined
Jun 20, 2005
Messages
1,390
Best answers
0
Nice stuff Flickone
his arms seem a big to bulky to me. Other than that gj
 
New Member
Joined
Jun 20, 2005
Messages
472
Best answers
0
arms to big, boots to short, skin it cell shaded :p and for me there are 2 many polygons, but if you dont aim for a PC count... i luv the pants folds..! : 0
 
New Member
Joined
Apr 16, 2005
Messages
164
Best answers
0
ShadyD said:
Nice stuff Flickone
his arms seem a big to bulky to me. Other than that gj
OMFG SEXINESS!! Thats a good goku right there >_< Keep up the good work flickone.
 
New Member
💻 Oldtimer
Joined
May 15, 2002
Messages
2,675
Best answers
0
-Nataku- said:
arms to big, boots to short, skin it cell shaded :p and for me there are 2 many polygons, but if you dont aim for a PC count... i luv the pants folds..! : 0
i dont think the arms are too big =o i think the boots look a little stubby thoe, but looks good ^^
 
New Member
✔️ HL Verified
💻 Oldtimer
Joined
May 28, 2006
Messages
1,094
Best answers
0
I agree, excellent polyflow as well! I'm especially impressed by the two protruding neck muscles, well done! Lordy, no crits, I've got nothing on that! Can't wait to see it skinned and celled!
 
Active Member
💻 Oldtimer
Joined
Nov 18, 2002
Messages
4,201
Best answers
0
i dont remember that Anime characters are supposed to be smooth ;)

although his boots bother me, as maybe the arms with their thickness. Or maybe its just the pose i dont like, I dont say it bad or else, but just he looks like a big body with tinny legs :-\

;) though you may do it like that because its your process, wanna see it done!

nice to c ya around here again.
 
New Member
💻 Oldtimer
Joined
Apr 14, 2005
Messages
4,022
Best answers
0
The arms look fine to me.

But maybe that's just me. x:
 
New Member
✔️ HL Verified
Joined
Jun 17, 2006
Messages
44
Best answers
0
wow thats cool u planning to release it???
 
2D/3D Artist
★ Black Lounger ★
✔️ HL Verified
💻 Oldtimer
Joined
Apr 28, 2003
Messages
2,999
Best answers
0
It does look a little out of proportions cause he used this SSJ3 Goku sheet:


Bad choice of reference but it's no biggy, I suggest you make the arms a tad skinnier, beef up his pants to be more baggy from the side and front, and sort out his boots :p good work though =)
 
New Member
💻 Oldtimer
Joined
Sep 11, 2005
Messages
3,746
Best answers
0
His arms are short and his boots are fat.
 

jp

New Member
💻 Oldtimer
Joined
Aug 23, 2003
Messages
1,561
Best answers
0
mf29 said:
His arms are short and his boots are fat.
The arms aren't too short, they are a tad too beefy.

But I really like it :eek: , I got no real crits.
 
2D/3D Artist
★ Black Lounger ★
✔️ HL Verified
💻 Oldtimer
Joined
Apr 28, 2003
Messages
2,999
Best answers
0
Go to sleep Jason.

Just follow the arms, pants and boots crits and you'll do fine.
 
New Member
Joined
Sep 24, 2005
Messages
42
Best answers
0
wow, i'm loving this model already. i think that's the best ss hair. keep it up!
 
New Member
Joined
Apr 28, 2004
Messages
66
Best answers
0
thx ppl for your posts i think it really helped out but still think somethink is wrong

made arms thinner made longer boots made bigger pants and made it more baggy...keep critting pls...

just if some ppl think that face is bit strange here is face how it will look prabobly skinned this skin was just testing month agodidnt even fiished it...

thx again and iam not planing to release it i think hl1 wont handle it and it will be skinned in cellshade but i think maybe i can releasy it in sdk. so some ppl can have some more fun..

here is that face skin test i made month ago



and here are fixing...

 
New Member
Joined
Jun 20, 2005
Messages
472
Best answers
0
yus =o sdk plz, i will skin it right away : ] oh boy oh boy cant wait!!!
 
New Member
Joined
Mar 1, 2006
Messages
605
Best answers
0
That's a good model. Keep it up man.
Have no crits to give.
 
New Member
Joined
Mar 27, 2005
Messages
209
Best answers
0
Location
Koszalin, Poland
Great model! Keep up the good work... Howecer I think that the upper torso part is too wide

U have sth like that with u're torso... it's V shaped
\____/
.\___/
It should look like that tho U shaped
|____|
.\___/

If u know what I mean :p

Still nice model :]
 

Users who are viewing this thread

Top Bottom