Goku WIP

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after making the vegeta model 3d modeling has become much easier to me. ive gotten a lot better. got this done in a couple of hours.

crits and comments please :)
 
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The hair and the face do not seem accurate. His waist is to small and his legs are too thin. Also his legs are too long. His collar bone area is also to big.

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You didnt make him very muscular, I think you should add definition to his legs and torso, and give him that manly-man pex!
 
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He looks a bit fat and he is going bold =o

Buuut. Nice work though :) also work on the pants and give it some folds.
 

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"Looks at tittle of pic"

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Ehh your using my usersname right now, not that I mind, and we all know you mean you... but it could get kinda confusing IMO...

And it feels kinda.. strange.

Oh well, whatever,

ontopic:

Proportions are kinda off, the neck is too long, his hair is odd, and same with legs...

http://empiredbz8.free.fr/

this site has loads of pics, perhaps you can use one as a refference pic. :)
 
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he looks like a tekken one model, but smooth.

proportions still man.

and its too round, make the edges a little more defined
 
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jp said:
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Ehh your using my usersname right now, not that I mind, and we all know you mean you... but it could get kinda confusing IMO...

And it feels kinda.. strange.

Oh well, whatever,
imposter! i am the real JP!

ill have an update soon... im a little busy lately.
 
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here's my drawover,dont mind what i did to the arms,cause its totally wrong.
 
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update!

ive been too busy for this stuff lately... finally sat down and put a couple hours of work into it... ended up hating the hair again.. but i got the rest looking better. hollatchaboi huh? c and c for me?
 
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he is way to buffed,make the bottom of his legs less fat,make his head bigger,scale the V-shape in his jacket to make it wider,give him shoulders and move his arms to the back.i like the head tough.can you post a wireframe?cause some parts look like they could use editing.
 
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the back of his hair has no spikes... what you are seeing is parts of the side spikes on his left side
 
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nice, but the hair and the ears look really weird...also the bottom portion of the pants dont look right.. i love the rest :D
 
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Jea the ears are a bit ... well big ^^

Like the rest though
 

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