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well yeah its been a loooooooooooooooooooooooong time since i did my last DBZ model
well still a WIP and i´ll do a ssj version too

C&C needed


 
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his body seems a bit to small but it's a very nice model
 
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it's more an gohan model than a goku.
nice anyway
 
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make his legs smaller, give him a differnt head and u have urself a bojack gohan X_x, but for a goku, he needs to be more buffed and his pants need to be baggier...he looks more like a teenager instead of adult =O
 
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Front and side perspectives would help us critisize better.:]
But from the looks of it, his body looks a bit skinny.
 
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if you edit the face a bit it looks like goku from the end of dragonball
keep up the good work
 
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yea goku looks too young.. make the body generally longer and larger
 
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well here ya go! front and side and also a crossover pic with 1 of my refs



 
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heh i did said you could use my arms but giving credits wont harm anyone >_>
the model looks pretty much ok, alot better since the last time you showed me.
the side view needs alot of work, the body needs more shape.
other then thats it's cool for a start ;)
 
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nice model. i like your modeling style. especially how you modeled the folds.

but here my crits:
the boots are supposed to be pointy,
the torso should be a lil bit buffer,
the hair isn't right yet. especially work on the sides.
and last but not least, the chin area should be more pointy (lookin from the front). just use your ref. there you have the shape of the head. i also think the head should be a lil tiny bit smaller overall.
 
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some parts of your ref dont match up with your model.. try making a perfect mirror image it should look better.. but its a real good start

 
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well sorry SV i forgot that :p
and well i suppose the side needs work yeah *drawover? *
and well the only thing that does not fir the ref is the hari but this is only a bit off
 
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strech the head vertically
make the boot a little longer and have it come to a point
make the arms a little longer,
make the upper body longer and well im not sure what more to do with the hair but it looks funky to me
 
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ok. i fixed some things an dtarted skinning it wont post pics now since only the face is done :p
also assigned it to the esf skeleton and i have to say : WOW
fits it better than i though and almost no clipping errors in the anims=)
 
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ok well yeah long time no update but finished normal and ssj so far. credits go to:

Super Vegetto: For letting me use his arms and telling me how to do this nice aura effect and for the critz he gave me

Martok: Alos for the Critz and help

MSF: Critz and motivation

Darktooth: For the poses in the renders *sorry was too lazy to do my own :p



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The non-SSJ face looks a bit funny to me.Try and fix that.Anywho, I love it.Please release this for ESF.I will be your eternal slave if you do :)
 
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well i think you just need to raise the shoulders, and it's okay in my opinion.
 
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meh actually the non-ssj face and the ssj face are the same -_-
 
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I'm liking the skin, looks very clean and simple. However the face seems chubby to me.
 

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