Goku (Normal stage)

[Denz]

nice mdl m8 but I think neck is 2 long is it?
and make the pants baggy •_•

 

[JDeezNutz]

sos my other host is down, but this is the picture, i just editted abit for Mystaix crits
what do you think of the mouth?

 

[Darkone]

I l just make the mouth go down so he has a mean vies besides mouth is modeled so i can always change its postion

 

[dynamic`]

no what he means it the shape of the jaw, it doesnt look right

 

[CrackerJack]

Why the hell do the pants change color, and the shirt, you have yellow, orange, red whats with the color scheme. hue it to 1 color, itll make it more natural. And the arms and skin tones are wrong. I know your trying to do darksuns "redish" look, but its wrong, dont do it. Not everything darksun does is right. Do skin tones, goku isnt red, hes baish. Hes Asian, not a alien.

and for neck:

 

[dynamic`]

Hes Asian, not a alien.

hmmmm thats funny
i thought he was sayian :\

 

[Darkone]

hmmmm thats funny
i thought he was sayian :\

Heh he mean like a breed of people , lol
Still i l try my best cant garantee anything thought

 

[CrackerJack]

Even so, ive never seen a red saiyan..
Gotens half asian, he looks the same as goku..

 

[Darkone]

Only 3 things i l agree with ya : 1) the nose , 2)hes eye browns 3)those bals

 

[Lord Killmore]

hehe this render makes him look like a statue looks cool!
well i actually love he model the way it is but maybe it´s just cause i´m too lazy to search for things to fix .
oh and Darkone why are you never answering on AIM?
im Master Introini

 

[Gogeta1]

That's awesome! But could you do it for ESF? Cos that would be cool to have it in ESF.

 

[Iyce Da Kidd]

its for ftp "feel the power". yes theres some flaws that have been pointed out already. im sure ure working on that now so there's no need to point em out

 

[Optimus Prime]

The chest looks funny, why does it appear to be rippley?

 

[Darkone]

Well i redone the chest , atached head , made new smoothing groups , added some hair , made many modification , fixed neck ...

 

[Super Veggeto]

that's looking alot better already, keep it up mate

 

[Almighty_Gir]

can i just ask which modeling program ur using?

 

[zeldalink]

he uses 3dsmax

 

[Nightcrawler]

good job, the shape of the head is much better now

 

[CrackerJack]

alright, the neck is acurate, i took the ref from my neck..

Buldge your neck and see how it looks, it doesnt come together.
And i still think you should fix the skintones, I know your trying to copy darksun, but w/e.

http://www.dbgtn.com/images/cels/goku/goku180.jpg
if you dont agree on the neck or skintones..
Hello Mr. Atonomy.

 

[Lord Killmore]

yeah looking better now. btw darkone his is a little off topic but how did you get this render in max?
my renders alway suck