goku 2nd pbp

[ssj 4 gogetenks]

heres a goku im making. im working on getting the torso rounder. critz?
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[Nuttzy]

you need to work on front/side proportions at teh same time, looking at that you only had a front ref as a drawover, it looks good from the front, but you rotate it just teh sigtest bit and you can tell off the bat its flat,

i usually make the vertexes positioned correctly in all views before connect triangles

 

[Iyce Da Kidd]

i just through verticies around and move em around to fit the characters appeareance.. but good model so far

 

[Vegeta]

Good work soo far man. All I can think of is scale it to be thinner. Looks a little wide

 

[ssj 4 gogetenks]

update
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[DaWg]

It looks pretty good but flat as was said earlier. It looks just a tad wide but that might be because of the flatness.

 

[ssj 4 gogetenks]

update
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[Vegeta]

Great progress man looking good :yes: Lets get some more shape in there add an arm or a neck. keep up the good work

 

[ssj 4 gogetenks]

i got lazy so i put on my trunks legs\feet. if u dont like the legs feetill make new ones i guess. and can someone model the arms\neck cuz i suck at that.
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[Iyce Da Kidd]

u should skale him down some... recolor him some... tweek it a little.. and redo him as goten

 

[Baaja]

well i dont think that you should have done that....but if you still want it like that i just want you to change the feet but you could keep the legs if u wanna

 

[ssj 4 gogetenks]

heres an update. thanks to Mr. smo (i used his model for a ref to make legs and belt)
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*edit* heres a pic for the poeple that cant see the model

 

[Nuttzy]

he looks kinda tubby up top, get rid of that beer belly

 

[Liltimy]

can someone plz give me ssj4vegeta babivegeta and ssj4 babi vegeta plz this my third time askin and a brolly to plz it would be greatly appreciated thanks alot if u do send it to [email protected] let me know nutzy anyone if u have it let me know and send it in aim or sumpin thax and gogeta if theres is one one

 

[grOOvy]

oO That's pretty decent, but the only thing that looks odd to me is 1.) He's a bit chubby on the top (as also pointed out by Nuttzy) and 2.) The folds on the lower pants look very scattered and irregular to me.

can someone plz give me ssj4vegeta babivegeta and ssj4 babi vegeta plz this my third time askin and a brolly to plz it would be greatly appreciated thanks alot if u do send it to [email protected] let me know nutzy anyone if u have it let me know and send it in aim or sumpin thax and gogeta if theres is one one

Liltimy: Do not deviate off-topic and ask for other models in someone's model WIP thread. Read this sticky to find what you are looking for.

 

[ssj 4 gogetenks]

update and i used smos boots for reference and they look almost the same. but i didnt rip them.
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[DaWg]

Offtopic:liltimy you cant go in some random ass thread and start begging for people to send you models. If this is your third time asking, and you havent received any word yet, maybe nobody has the files for you. You can do a search on any search engine and find sites that may have those files that you are looking for. Not to mention that, but if you'd use the search button up in the corner once in a while and did a search on bebi vegeta then maybe you would find the threads on the models you want. Usually the modeller will say where the file is being hosted, and if its at redsaiyan, then wait for the site to come back online eventually, because its moving to a new server somewhere.

Ontopic:Those boots look a little oddly shaped and short, like Goku had his toes cut off. It might just be the angle though.

 

[ssj 4 gogetenks]

update i made the boots longer and i made the pant scrutch up at the bottom

 

[Nuttzy]

the torso is strangely proportioned still, make it more like a chest shape, look at smos model again for reference

 

[ssj 4 gogetenks]

update used smos torso as ref again (lol).
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