He has the two spikes of hair comming out of the back of his head, you cant just forget about them because you dont like them. Anyway its lookin pretty good except from the side and the hair, you need to look at david's hair and some more pics from the anime, just keep workin and im sure it will turn out pretty good.
get it?, you know if you got a warning for each time you double posted in this thread alone youd have been banned by now, but thats not for me to decide so i wont say anything else,
the front still looks blocky, especially the torso, you need to more closely follow davids ref, (or your others) cuz that chest is bad, and the rest isnt much better
the torso is wayyy too wide, and the belt shouldnt slant like that, thats it for now, thats all i can crit that i could see could actually help the model, if it was my mmodel id select all delete and restart, but like i said above, thats not my call
I still don't get why you can't actually FOLLOW THE REFS. His hair isn't accurate, it looks like someone attacked his head with a chainsaw. His pants seem too baggy from the side view, and he has the anatomy of a playdoh character. Look at a good muscle guide, he isn't nearly defined enough, and his shoulders are too broad