Gohan SSJ2

[D2]

Heej Peep's

I've been workin on a Gohan SSJ2 model and I would appreciate if people could give me some hints, draw overs to help me improve it. or just plain o'll critisize it

here is a FlatShade


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And here is a Smooth Shade


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Poly count is @ 2182

Btw Don't know if this is allowed on this forum but we are still in search and need of a good skinner so if you want to give it a go please PM me ^_^

 

[Almighty_Gir]

apart from the pants, it looks good...the pants are just sloppy...

 

[ray_1301]

me thinks face looks a bit sloppy too0000oo, like the arms tho.

 

[DBXMe2]

it looks good, but you still need to model a few models for everyone to say DAMN

but ur ****ing doing great so far me likes!

 

[Mr. Phonso]

u gotta make the hair more taller and you also have to make the stand of hair that covers his face much longer and thiner, im not sure about the face yet

 

[D2]

Thx All, I'm gonna work on it as soon as i Get back from school and keep you updated of course

* Edit


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Updated
Face
Hair
Pants

 

[Ravendust]

Looking good, about the strand of hair, it needs to cover the face a bit more and needs to be slightly more curved as long as it doesn't up the polys much:

I know it's from Movie 9 and not the Cell Games Saga, but I found this to be a better ref.

EDIT:

 

[D2]

I overwritten the previous image

Edited the hair strand
* Slighty Curved
* A little longer

 

[PiXel]

I allready gave flickone a little drawover of a crit... .U dont fixed it or?
The Pants are to small and widhtless as i see.....Anyway: !Welcome to the Forums!

 

[Kreshi]

This should help a little:

 

[Mr. Phonso]

nice to see you followed some of my hair crits, doesnt it look much better now? XD

 

[D2]

Thx Kreshi, and the rest also of course


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@ tryforce
ehm what draw over ? did flick showed you my model ?


Btw, if NE1 has a good ref for the pants please show me or make a good draw over I would appreciate it very much

 

[PiXel]

Yeah flick shown me it... and he told me that he´d send it to me... contact me that i can redo a drawover and give it u

 

[DBXMe2]

there is a difference between the 2 gohans... their hair is the same.. just that there is more wind in one then the other.. thus diferent hair

 

[MajinVegeta Tim]

thats nice keep it up

 

[The_Real_Legend]

Ok some issue points:
-underlip: it's like he's tasting something sour.
-eyes: he looks surprised to see me... lower the ends of eyebrouws so it's in a smaller angle to the eyes.
-neck: to muscular... I would thin it. Look at the shown refs.
-arms same as neck
-pants: to puffed up all over. It should just be that wide at the bottom. You should thinnen them alot starting from the knees and up. Hope you know what i mean.
-and I would widen the head alltogether. I think it would look better.


But offcourse it already looks good. And it's just my opinion.

 

[Oloneuvos]

If you are going to make that model, please don't do some fing thin arms. I've seen enough of them. btw this model looks good!

 

[Growler]

superb man, can u make a ssj gohan with cape?

 

[D2]

ehm maybe

I made (tried) to make a skin for Gohan 2 I used the pants from my Goku skin but just colorized em


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[Mr. Phonso]

its too tan for gohan, and if u could still edit the model make some parts of his hair wider!