Gohan Model WIP

[RZAtheRZARECTOR]

Well... this is what I'm workin on... still got some work to do on it but figure I might as well see if I can get any reactions

<img src="http://chewy.lcvalentine.com/wip.jpg">
http://chewy.lcvalentine.com/wip.jpg


peace


:idea:

EDIT: I just changed the picture, did a little to him, it may not be noticiable

 

[SkulkMaster]

I'm not a modeler, but that looks decent. The arms need to be less triangular though. they look a bit odd

EDIT: Forgot to mention the skin. Pretty good.

 

[Loki]

Hair comes into the center like sumtin is pullin it big no no.

 

[JoeFunk]

...

hehehe not bad... u need a lot of fixs tho

the hands need better dimension
the top muscles on his arms are out of perportion
head is to long needs 2 be wider
the bodys frame is to long some work
legs are 2 thin need 2 be baggy
for a newb modeler thats bretty good! ^_^
if u work at those ull be an excelent modeler and mapper

 

[RZAtheRZARECTOR]

btw, a vertex in the tip of the thumb disapeered... thats probably gunna be a problem when assigning joints and bones stuff like that... solution?

 

[Emeka650]

Nice

Nice model man.Its alright to me

 

[ced]

not bad,you should redo your arms,hands and head though,but the rest looks okay
=)

 

[SCIxX]

His face and hair needs bit fixing up. Overal looks good :yes:

 

[owa]

his arms are spears?

 

[DoBi]

Bah this happens to me way 2 meny times!

i cant see the model ... the site just loades up a milion years and then shows me an error or no page at all.

please post another imege with the messege it self so i could see it!
tnx(Even if u dont post o_o )

 

[DoBi]

My bad...i can see the model now!

Took it alot of time to load up but it did ... any way i think it looks gr8 and u did a wonderful job besides the arms every thing looks gr8.

2 more things
1 : on wich saga gohan looks like that?
2: 3 posts! whoa iam posting here like a madman!

 

[Naz]

buu saga when he's training with the z-sword

 

[Emeka650]

clothes

Change his clothes to mystic.He would look alot better.And change the mouth.Make him look mean

 

[RZAtheRZARECTOR]

I like those clothes!!!

 

[~Majin_Satan~]

face looks kinda weird.. but the rest is ok

 

[SS_Vegeta]

Arms are too long. Move everything below the shoulder closer to the body.

Hair is alot a tad too long.

Proportions are good. Animating the legs with that little coat thing is gonna be a pain though.

Post some flat shaded shots from the front and side. Whats the poly count btw?

 

[RZAtheRZARECTOR]

Well... it was 800 polies... unfortunatly... my computer messed up.. and I lost all the work... sux...