Its nice... but the guy's hairline is flat.... thats kinda wrong add some shading to it to give it some volume.... parts of it look flat... like the ear for example. Proportions are pretty good too Overall its good... yea....
I agree with Lone wolf.. it looks like his hair is growing out of his brain?
and one more thing.. he has to wear the Pottera earrings. (or whatever they are called) not just a normal Earring.. but else. i like his eyes they are soo cool, and looks mad
well, the eyes looks nice, but the right ear is way to pointy and big, and the hair line,... you know.
and just that 1 fold i c, i think in sorta ruins the picture, the fold on the under right.
(7 cuber from the right to the left)
overral looks nice, but add some debts.
Tell him to use line wieghts if inking... it gives ALOT more depth if done right... a forewarning is not to use Sharpies when inking...it leaks alot, and its basicly the same size throughout the whole thing...