Gogeta!

[Suh Dude]

If you want to help me make it better, then please tell me what should I fix, and add. If you don't like it, and you're going to post something BS, don't even post.

 

[-Origin]

Is he hiding a brick in his pants?

 

[Suh Dude]

I asked for help, not BS post.

 

[Nuttzy]

If you don't like it, and you're going to post something BS, don't even post.

well that just negated the chances of anybody giving you criticism that didnt sound a little bit harsh, dont say i didnt warn you lol

your muscle layout is 100% incorrect, you go it all in the right AREA just not the right PLACE, namely the collarbone area

get that area down right and ill see what crits i can offer you for the rest of it,

/gets back to modelling

 

[Sadner]

Some people have big ***** Chaos =P
It's looking nice slim, glad you got back into skinning
define the pants more, and use some more colors for the abs/chest, you're doing great !


Dont evade the swear filter, its there for a reason. ~TwisteR

 

[Nuttzy]

I asked for help, not BS post.

if telling you something wrong with it is a BS post, then how is anybody going to give you the help your asking for?

i wont hesitate to close this if you continue to fire back at people who are trying to help you,

 

[TwisteR]

X could have been more descriptive with his post, it was hardly criticism that could be taken constructivly, but most of us understood what he meant by it.

Carry on please....

 

[g0jack]

Yeah, I think his pecs should move up a bit

 

[TeKNiK]

Since you asked for help, i'd suggest just starting over and using some good anatomy references.

Since i doubt you'll start over you should move his pecs up as Jack said. Also, the pants lack definition in the folds that you have done, so darken the shadows just a bit. I'd also completely redo his crotch. His abs and chest also look pretty flat so add some depth to them. Finally i'd add a bit more color to his skintone.

You asked for help minus the "BS" so there it is. No Bs.

Also, maybe read some digital painting tutorials that should help a lot assuming you're willing to make an effort to get better. -_-

 

[DMW]

I think its just his hair, nobody can seem to give him a good ssj hair style, all it really is is ssj vegeta with the hair you already got in front.Or its like gotenks hair as well just a little longer.

 

[Fire Phoenix]

the pecs and the abs look blocky as in they look like blocks, make them look more.... round, i guess is the best way to put it. aslo i agree with x again it looks blocky, try to round it off a bit.

 

[L]

I asked for help, not BS post.

Meh.. Guy go on MSN, I wanna try skin his face o/


edited to remove inapropriate comments. please leave that thing in private >_> - Mad_AxMan
-edit-
What? I don't remember what I posted?! ><

 

[CM]

What you need to work on is breaking the old habits. All of your skins have the same mistakes done over and over, and you can fix it pretty easily. First of all, you lack definition. Period. Looks like you use burn and dodge. If so, ditch it. And put some highlights on that thing.

Second, anatomy. One thing you ALWAYS screw up on is the collarbone. Once again, it goes in a V position, not a / \ one. Work on that. Move abs and pecs up (pecs are almost on his belleh) and work cleaner.

 

[Shadershi]

wow, that's some kick ass model!

 

[Suh Dude]

Sorry guys for not responding for a while. I got ran over on thursday. Scratches, bruises, and a 7 inch cut. Not sure what will happen to the driver. Atleast I don't have to go to court. Anyways, I'm not sure where I put this model at, but I guess I accidently deleted it. So, I guess I have to reskin everything again. Darn.

 

[Mr. Phonso]

Sorry guys for not responding for a while. I got ran over on thursday. Scratches, bruises, and a 7 inch cut. Not sure what will happen to the driver. Atleast I don't have to go to court. Anyways, I'm not sure where I put this model at, but I guess I accidently deleted it. So, I guess I have to reskin everything again. Darn.

aw man, sorry to hear that, was it really that bad getting run over by a car?

btw good luck on your recovery

 

[KidMan]

Sorry guys for not responding for a while. I got ran over on thursday. Scratches, bruises, and a 7 inch cut. Not sure what will happen to the driver. Atleast I don't have to go to court. Anyways, I'm not sure where I put this model at, but I guess I accidently deleted it. So, I guess I have to reskin everything again. Darn.

You got hit by a car!?!?!?!? How in the hell did that happen? O_O

 

[Suh Dude]

Well, I was walking down the hill, and I was crossing the street, and of course there was a walking signal. I walked, and then a guy in a Toyoto Camery talking to someone in his cell, and of course he wasn't paying attention to the road. Right there, me in the middle of the street. I couldn't move, and BAM SWUSHHH ERRRKKKKK. I thought it was the end for me. I was knocked out cold, but when I woke up, I felt like a beat up person. It wasn't that bad being hurt. I was in the hostpital for one day. When I got up to go to the car, OH MY GOD my 7 INCH cut started bleeding like hell. They put bandage all over it. They said I didn't need stitches, and thats what happen folks. My friend Mike was on my computer and on MSN telling everybody what happen and such.

Thanks Darksniper, I'm like 56% recovered, and yes, it was that bad getting ran over.

 

[KidMan]

Hey don't worry about recovery, its a snap. Hell, I broke my neck on October 14th at school on a slip n slide and Im walki0ng around, talking and eveything else like it never happened before. The docs thought I was going to be paralyzed but Im not. Thank god I had the Doc who worked on Christopher Reeves.

 

[Bboy_Budokai]

wth, for some reason it looks like crap on a stick to me.

bad skin, blocky model. arms look long, and hair is horrid.

but it may be me...

i'm no modeler.