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heres my wip, im leaving the sakura to elemental since i cant do much more on it since i dont know jack about her porportions



 
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Looks good to me. I don't see anything wrong with it.
 
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why.... does the normal one... have a pony tail...

it all looks good, i'll definately use them, ben waiting for a model like this.

but could you make the ss hair more spikey, and the normal hair just long, i dont remember it having a pony tail.

http://images.myfavoritegames.com/ImageFolio31_files/gallery-db-z-gt-x/Trunks/trunksssjnopupils.jpg
http://images.myfavoritegames.com/ImageFolio31_files/gallery-db-z-gt-x/Trunks/trunkssuprised5.jpg

did he have his hair in a pony tail when he came out of the chamber? if so i dont remember...

could you make those versions of hair ^^

reguardless, the ones you have now are great, just add a little more spike to the ss version. sweet models.
 
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i do..fix the bug on the armor... (looks down the bottom of the armor front view)

great joby XD
 
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2 small crits, firstly the SSJ hair looks a bit too limp, secondly he's too buff. Those muscles belong on USSJ Trunks (the first pic Zero posted) not normal or SSJ. Other than that, mantastic :D

And Zero, he had his long hair in a pony tail (normal and SSJ), when he went USSJ2 the hairband snapped and then when he reverted back to normal form his hair was down on account of there being nothing to hold it up. The only disadvantage is if he descends from USSJ his hairband will reappear :p
 
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to be completely honest, i think youve made him too buff =/
 
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I think he's talking about this his little line in his armor goes over part of the bottom. and his side.This part of his arm looks weird too.
Also where his hand ends and the glove extends it looks like they are seperate parts but they are suppossed to be one long glove and the right side of his neck looks weird. All of this is from the front/side view.
 
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he is now less muscular and i fixed the bug tryforce said, it was just something to do wiht the smoothing groups. and im not sure what your trying to say about the glooves =/

oh wait now i do, the glove looks seprate cuz its in diff smoothing groups
 
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Very nice Trunks model but I noticed his forehead is very long. Overall it's a great model.
 
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As X-boy said, the forehead is too long/big, also, his forearms...even for dbz proportions are way WAY too short, they look to be about the size of his hand, when I'm pretty sure the typical forearm is a bit longer than our bicep area.

To a lesser extent the legs/thighs have the same problem, the thighs are too long, so the calves/lower leg looks too short.

His normal hair looks good, but his ssj hair has too few spikes, it looks like he lost the back half of his hair. The pony tail at the back should be sticking out more straight as well.

And to recycle what Ravendust said, he's way too buff, he should be skinnier specifically the arms and torso, he should have more of a V shape. His shoulders can stay the same size though, since those are huge even when he's not USSJ as seen in http://www.myfavoritegames.com/detail.aspx?i=Trunks/trunksssjcrossingarms.jpg
 
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better? im pretty sure i did the ssj hair right (if you still think not ill get a ref from the show)

 
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noo u have the trunks hair right with the pony tail.. and i'd have to add that he looks a little chunky..

now i know these models arent perfect but i like the proportions and how the hair was made on the models


 
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finally!!! ive been waitin for another good trunks model for soo long.

anyway the hair is right well it looks right to me

http://templeotrunks.com/images/screencaps/Mirai Trunks/ep141/dvd_miraitr_ep141_scrn3.jpg

http://templeotrunks.com/images/screencaps/Mirai Trunks/ep142/dvd_miraitr_ep142_scrn1.jpg

and for the ssj hair

http://templeotrunks.com/images/screencaps/Mirai Trunks/ep143/dvd_miraitr_ep143_scrn3.jpg

http://templeotrunks.com/images/screencaps/Mirai Trunks/ep145/dvd_miraitr_ep145_scrn5.jpg

so yea it looks good to me. id say the only problem is on the ssj hair the pieces of hair in the front on both sides droop down too much.
 
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nice but im not a fan of the ssj hair, it's good but it's not accurate enough...


i suggest you should go with that one.
the ssj ponytail should be a tad more spikier.
face seem kinda wierd from perspective, i think the side is mainly the problem but im not sure...

other wise good job! =D
 

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Dude omg thats great,is he playable? if so please let me know when you upload him and he is up for grabs.
 
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