Heh...I just put up the post. You'll see why it took two days!
It would have been done this afternoon but I had gotten dragged in to bail out the paper again. 8 newspaper page layouts, and over 2 dozen ads built today...I was there from 1-11 with no breaks.
Trust me, it's worth the wait. At least I think so. The dialogue is hilarious, and the fight itself is one of the best I've written, I think.
ALSO PLEASE NOTE: I did not mean to offend anyone with my generic portrayals of them in the post. Really they were just names I attached in. I didn't mean to piss off anyone, especially Shin Carl, since he's all reformed and whatnot now.
(Unless you're Gonadz, in which case I thoroughly regret not using the opportunity to diss you more.)
Either way I think it was a good post and unfortunately for Brim, it's a tough act to follow. :0\
Sorry Brim.