I think you made a good choice for the font. It's a little difficult to read, but it has a very eastern calligraphic look to it, which fits very well with the samurai theme. I'm also a big fan of Chrono Trigger, so you get big points from me for that. However, there are some things to work on. The outline on "Neo-Samurai" corrupts the look of the font, either get the outline behind the fill or try a different effect. I also think that the way you have everything arranged now leaves the right side very unbalanced visually. You might think about moving things around a little bit. Lensflares are fine and all, but I think in digital art they've been abused to the point that they should only be used when absolutely necessary. You did a very good job for the first time, just keep practicing as others have said. Always practice.