First polly by polly model...

[Neon]

It's goten.... Crits please

 

[Baaja]

well first you need to update it more but it looks good so far....exept that i think that the blue chest should be less tall....(you get the point)

 

[DaWg]

yea the blue shouldnt go down so far, otherwise its looks ok.

 

[Neon]

Thanks guys, and it did go down that far kinda....

 

[Protoman]

w00t nice start neon keep da good work up

 

[Neon]

Update

fix the shape of the torso a bit.... and fix belt...

 

[ssj 4 gogetenks]

looks good but try to not make the belt so round make the sides of it flatter.

 

[Protoman]

man your doin good :devgrin: :talk: :devil: heh keep up da good work :yes:

 

[Galst Vic]

It would be nice to show a side view it kinda looks made out of extrusion but well.Looks good nothing amazing show side view you should show all the views.If you want good crits.

 

[Nuttzy]

extruding is not a bad thing, as long as you know how to clean up the areas that it doesnt work well with. (knees and elbows)

 

[Neon]

Hope these help

 

[Seph`]

Looking good, the blue doesnt go THAT far down.

5/10 since its only the top :]
I bet 10/10 when done.

 

[Sonic the Vampire]

It's looking good. A note though about the pictures you posted:

Try not to post extreemly wide pictures... they mess up the text wrapping and force people who don't read the forums in 2024x1600 on a 50 inch flat screen TV to scroll back and forth which is an issue for some members.

 

[B|inX]

its a good model, but the arm pits are kinda weird, maybe have them go in a little bit then up to the arms . other then that, the model is good

 

[Super_Vegeta.LE]

not a bad start, especially for a first model, i really ought to start modeling again, yknow, take some of the pressure off nuttzy

As a tip, try to post the models as flat shaded, since we are able to help with crits more then, smooth shaded hides things like wrong edges, and wasted polygons, just a friendly tip

Keep up the good work, ill keep my eye on this one, just im me for tips if you need some, ill be glad to help.

 

[ShadowKillah]

looking great so far i like it!