First polly by polly model...

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well first you need to update it more but it looks good so far....exept that i think that the blue chest should be less tall....(you get the point)
 
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yea the blue shouldnt go down so far, otherwise its looks ok.
 
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Thanks guys, and it did go down that far kinda....
 
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Update
fix the shape of the torso a bit.... and fix belt...
 
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man your doin good :devgrin: :talk: :devil: heh keep up da good work :yes:
 
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It would be nice to show a side view it kinda looks made out of extrusion but well.Looks good nothing amazing show side view you should show all the views.If you want good crits.
 
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extruding is not a bad thing, as long as you know how to clean up the areas that it doesnt work well with. (knees and elbows)
 
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Looking good, the blue doesnt go THAT far down.

5/10 since its only the top :]
I bet 10/10 when done.
 
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It's looking good. A note though about the pictures you posted:

Try not to post extreemly wide pictures... they mess up the text wrapping and force people who don't read the forums in 2024x1600 on a 50 inch flat screen TV to scroll back and forth which is an issue for some members.
 
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its a good model, but the arm pits are kinda weird, maybe have them go in a little bit then up to the arms . other then that, the model is good
 
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not a bad start, especially for a first model, i really ought to start modeling again, yknow, take some of the pressure off nuttzy ;)

As a tip, try to post the models as flat shaded, since we are able to help with crits more then, smooth shaded hides things like wrong edges, and wasted polygons, just a friendly tip :)

Keep up the good work, ill keep my eye on this one, just im me for tips if you need some, ill be glad to help.
 

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