first model, krillin wip

[Enix]

i tried really hard and this is what i got so far. after i fix the mess ups and stuff im going to need it skiner. so tell me what you think.:
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<p>as you can see its not done. im still a huge modeling noob so give me a break. Critz please!

 

[MajinZGohan]

I admire your effort, but didnt you already have another thread somehwere, and another thread somehwere here too?

 

[Enix]

I admire your effort, but didnt you already have another thread somehwere, and another thread somehwere here too?

<P> all i understood was "i admire your effort" the rest is a blur. please explain. and any critz

 

[MajinZGohan]

sorry i meant that didnt you start a thread somewhere else on this forum about your krillin model?

 

[Enix]

no i started a thread asking help on modeling and i mentioned my krilling model in it
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i just realised that model sucks eggs!! so i redid it from scratch. here it is:
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<p>im going to do some more monday. the model should be done around tuesday. Critz on the new one please!!

 

[Tassadar]

Hmm, it looks much better now, unfortunatly there isn't too much to crit on. Everything looks accurate so far, good job.

 

[Enix]

i added the arms and fixed a few minor probs.:
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<p>critz please!!

 

[Alteh]

The arms are way to small and to far down.