First map!

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My first map

My First map :laff:
Small but very detail , download here

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comments?

 

[Gears]

Not bad for a first map...I was actually wanting a dust style esf map...but the only and only thing I can think of that can make map better is making it twice or 2.5 times bigger

 

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thanks :] , i got a now idea and this map be bigger :\

 

[Cold Steel]

It's not that detailed, but i suppose it's good for a first map. Use triangles to add more depth, "detail" and variation.