finally started gotenks (W.I.P)

[The_Real_Legend]

Phew the last 2 weeks have been a hell at school. You couldn't imagine how much work I had. Now it's weekend and I've finally inked a gotenks who I think looks really fresh. I will start to cg it later on.

Now does anyone have problems with the hair???
And doen't come whining that it isn't gotenks real hair.

 

[niracleprince]

i love it...8/10

 

[X-iT_W0uN|)]

when are we gonna see the cg version? Well this one is really good :laff:

 

[Bolteh2]

legs are too long and misshaped (folds), the feet are misshaped/misplaced, the arms are too long, the belts is too low + in wrong angle (its like hes lowering his pants to show his ass) the upper body needs work specially the connection to the hips/waist), the shouldermuscles dont suddently stop you know, they smooth out behind the biceps...
his right xhestmsucle is in a different angle than his left + the collarbone-neck area is too high

it aint bad but can use a lot of work

6/10



edit: heres what i did in 5 mins, it aint that good, just a quick skecth what i think of the proportions (yes i know the foot is screwed and the arms arent that good neither + he isnt as buffed as urs)

 

[The_Real_Legend]

hey thanks bolteh for the crits. My mistake with those flaws. I'll keep them in mind next time. (those little flaws useally come in when I ink my pic)
ok here's a first non shaded version. Just to let you see him in colour

any critz on the colours? I would be surprised. :laff:

 

[Maistro]

It looks very good but the hair looks off