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hey I made this wallpaper, I don't think its done yet, and I do want to improve some stuff.. But before I do, I want some crits.

bad crits, good crits, everything goes :) the more oppinions, the better.

 
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Looks nice
can't give alot of critz
maybe you could the logo a little more to the left
that's about it
great work :eek:
 

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it's quite nice.. but.. well, low detailed though..
 
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yeah I agree on that myself, its a bit plain. I need more 'lines' or atleast something that keeps it interesting longer than 5 seconds :)

I still need to fix that up
 

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Yea more detail would make it nice, or making the outside of the 'tunnel' a lil brighter :eek:
 
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yeah I guess that will make it nicer aswell.. i'll try when I get back home (@ work right now)
 
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well it could flow a bit better, the color looks a bit to solid. mabey some extra brushing could help. the pixy dust brush although over used might help aswell
 
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i dont really like brushing in the middle, kinda looks a little chaotic in a couple of areas and the whole piece looks a little plain aswell.. but good luck with the final version :)
 
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Yeah kinda plain, some vectors could make it more interesting.
 
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i think we all know its kinda plain but i agree with 1m4 0wn y0 455, a solid color would work better
 
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Ooooh.... pretty... Very nice Judge. :D I like the way it looks, and the colors are perfect for me. Although you might want to work on the text a little bit. The font doesn't fit. Astonished is the font I'd choose for it.

10/10 :yes:
 
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judge man.. where did ya skill go??? u used to make much betta stuff back then..

not that great...
 
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It's cool I like it just needs more detail the seroundings are really dull
 
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ok, its not abd, but the 2d kinda really sux :S
and......it looks kinda Boring
 

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