[Fanfiction]Berserk: The misery.[May contain unstuitable content]

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Cold Steel said:
Just curious though, is it too edgy sometimes, or should I add more ehm adult stuff XD ?
Wouldnt want to see you beeing the first team member who gets a warning for adoult content ^^

But a better description of how a guys head went off could spice things up XD


But heck just my opinion. I like it. And belive me when i say this. I dont read stuff i even think is not good XD
 
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Same here.

The fight scenes could use some spice but the story itself is AWESOME!!! Loved the character development on Rowe and Algaran.
 
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*writes down* More fighting detail. Alright, I'll keep it in mind when writing the next one. The next one won't have a lot of fighting though, I think. But I'll keep it in mind when the next fight comes up.

Chapter 1a and 1b have been partially rewritten to fit the rest of the story a little better. The writing style differed a lot from the current, and at some parts it was a bit vague.

Feel free to post by the way, I can't double post if you catch my drift.
 
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OMFG!!! You are an amazing writer man!!! Plz update soon!!

P.S. OK Kama I read it do I get to become a beta tester now? ;(
 
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I'm still deciding on some events in the story to occur in the current chapter or not. I'll update it soon.
 
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I just wanted everyone to know, that I've completely dropped this story. In my opinion it became completely over the top, and I'm stuck at where I'm now.
 
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AWW :(

Oh well it was nice while it lasted :)
 

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