"Elfen lied" signature

[Jariroth]

I decided to make a new sig...(well i think its better than the last one)

I tried to capture Lucy's evil side, while still keeping Nyu's innocence.
C&C plz...

 

[kaiz0ku]

Well I really like the render but text and the background is boring. :S

It really needs something..

 

[Hamppu]

I like it, how the nick is hanging just above the blood splatter, and how the anime girl is looking neat there ^^ 9/10

 

[john_volkov]

it look's cool dude I like it

 

[Jariroth]

Well I really like the render but text and the background is boring. :S

It really needs something..

It would be nice if you gave me some kind of suggestion...
And im not too fond of those sigs with full of brushed BG.

 

[Gon]

She looks too innocent to be Lucy.

And I think the backround needs to be a darker color..

 

[Jariroth]

Here's a quick makeover:

How about now? Dark enough? Plain black looked too....plain. So i made quick gradient. But i can still tweak it...

Edit:
Tadah! I made a better one(at least i think so). Just made the blood drops darker along with the background.

Another Edit:
Behold! Both Signatures in one picture!(And within forum limits)

LOL! I'm not gonna use it though... Made just for fun.

 

[Kaination]

I much prefer the white. The black just gives off a straight up evil kinda look, but the white gives off more of a demented kinda look.

Not sure if that was the way to say it, but it's the first thing that came to my head.

White = 9/10

black = 6/10

 

[Jariroth]

Heh! Black is supposed to give it a bit evil type look...Allow me to explain:
The character in the picture actually has type of twin personality, Nyu is the innocent side and Lucy is the evil mass murder mutant.
Nyu is actually innocent as people can be, she could be compared to just born baby, As she lacks ability to speak or even understand speaking. Oly thing she can say is Nyu.
Lucy on the other hand is Person who could care less about living beings and kills about everyone who gets in her way. How, you ask? Well she contains several invisible extra "arms", which can block bullets, throw stuff, cut stuff and basically can rip a people in shreds. They can extent to only 2 metres though. So thats about as evil as you can get.

 

[jp]

Here's a quick makeover:

How about now? Dark enough? Plain black looked too....plain. So i made quick gradient. But i can still tweak it...

Much better then the white ones,

Elfen lied is a very macabre anime, so it should have some darkness in it, i know white shows the blood better, but dark is a bit better for this anime-sig.

But is that Lucy? didn't lucy looked much, different? or is this from the manga?

Thats lucy as nyuu (when she's stupid coz her memory is blocked).

And lucy as... herself, (don't mind the silly hat, lol, she's very evil there).

I do think she looks a lot different there, maybe its just me though.

 

[MF29]

I decided to make a new sig...(well i think its better than the last one)

I tried to capture Lucy's evil side, while still keeping Nyu's innocence.
C&C plz...

Dont use black, Use white. :yes: 9/10

 

[Jariroth]

@jp: Well the render is clipped out of mangas cover so it's not from the anime.
@mf29: Yeah i like the white better too...