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Well I decided to put some artwork up to get feedback and support so i can improve my technique.. and well.. get some feedback to keep my motivation high

some of these are characters for my future movie.. hopefully one day ill fulfill my dream of making it

enjoy:

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not a single comment?

wow.. how hard is it to say good.. i think this.. that...:\

ill try my luck in deviantart... ¬¬
 
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I think your drawings are good, and because they have a unique style to them..



and the shading is very nicely done =] tho if you were going for accuracy in human features.. I give u a slap *kapow*!! even tho it looks nice =] the proportions are off =].(STILL THIS CAN BE A GOOD THING, depending on what u were going for )

that pope guy is scary >=[, were you trying to make him that way =]? and is he human / not o_O?

my fav out of those is #2
 
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VideoJinx said:
I think your drawings are good, and because they have a unique style to them..



and the shading is very nicely done =] tho if you were going for accuracy in human features.. I give u a slap *kapow*!! even tho it looks nice =] the proportions are off =].(STILL THIS CAN BE A GOOD THING, depending on what u were going for )

that pope guy is scary >=[, were you trying to make him that way =]? and is he human / not o_O?

my fav out of those is #2
thanx.. but yea i got my own style in proportions.. kinda western comic book style and anime.
yea the pope is human under the influence of evil..
but yea no.2 is my favorite out of all of them.. took me the longest too ;)
 
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Are you by any chance goth or something?
Not trying to offend you or anything, but it leaks massively out of your drawings.

I know it's your style, but you should try to draw some faces that don't have that makeup around their eyes (Like the right one in your sig, still has that blackness but it doesn't look like makeup). Variety makes it that more engaging.

The monster, i like the best, but looks unfinished at the bottom. The highly detailed thorax contrasts with it.

Speaking of details, try adding more of them to your clothing. Plain white just isn't pretty to look at. Anything can help: folds, stitches, borders or even some spots here and there to give a feel of texture.

In general i think your drawings look kind of medieval. Not because of the content, rather it's the lack of depth (the characters look flat) aswell as some anatomy and proporion issues. I think you need to work on perspective and it will show progress in all of those fields.

A part in this medieval look might just be your style, but it's definitely also your drawing technique.

I saw your drawings yesterday and i thought they deserved elaborate comment. I was just too tired to do so.
 
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The_Real_Legend said:
Are you by any chance goth or something?
Not trying to offend you or anything, but it leaks massively out of your drawings.

I know it's your style, but you should try to draw some faces that don't have that makeup around their eyes (Like the right one in your sig, still has that blackness but it doesn't look like makeup). Variety makes it that more engaging.

The monster, i like the best, but looks unfinished at the bottom. The highly detailed thorax contrasts with it.

Speaking of details, try adding more of them to your clothing. Plain white just isn't pretty to look at. Anything can help: folds, stitches, borders or even some spots here and there to give a feel of texture.

In general i think your drawings look kind of medieval. Not because of the content, rather it's the lack of depth (the characters look flat) aswell as some anatomy and proporion issues. I think you need to work on perspective and it will show progress in all of those fields.

A part in this medieval look might just be your style, but it's definitely also your drawing technique.

I saw your drawings yesterday and i thought they deserved elaborate comment. I was just too tired to do so.
haha no im not goth..but yea I can see what you mean by it.
And yeah i know perspective is way off, my knowledge of it is scarce.
Ill try and work on that and see how it helps improve the technique...
as for the textures.. yea its just lazyness that prevents me giving clothing more detail.. ill keep in mind what you said tough.

thanks for the comments ;)
 

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