Edward Elric Model

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One day i decided to make edward elric. Im still workin on em (although ive been too busy to do so in a while). Here's what i got so far:




There are more production images on my site over here: http://timk.sytes.net
 
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Holy Crap nice work keep it up can i get a copy of it when ur finish its awsome =)
wat program u used to make it?
 
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Very nice, my only crit would be to lose the smirk. It doesn't fit his expression at all. His eyes are too lifeless and neutral for a smirk. So yeah, lose the smirk and it'll look really good.
 
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Kamajama!

Well, I love it :). He just looks like he dosnt really care about anything that is happening, what are you thinking about using it for? Looks great, keep it up dude.
 
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did you remake the hair because i thought you said you were but it looks the same and also did you remap the coat? i thought i dupe half over
 
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The head is not done yet (as many of u can tell). That includes the hair which i still have yet to even start on. All i did for the render was color the hair a tiny bit (its not even skinned properly yet).

Ill try and work on it some time this week and update u guys w some pics.
 

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He looks a bit chubby.. check the neck area, I think it is too wide.
 
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great work.

only thing i could suggest would be to make his neck a bit thinner.

Excellent I really like this. Good job.
 
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hmmm i would lower the neck colar and make his neck little thinner and add a little bit more detail to the hood like make the hood a little bit wider and fatter
 
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Neck- Make thinner.
Hair- Have nicely textured skin and make longer.
Face- A little chubby, make a tiny bit thinner.
 
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yes ima make his neck a bit thinner. lol i havnt realized how thick it was till now. (thats y i love forums, good critz)

And as for skinning/detail, im not nearly complete w the head (as ive said b4)

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neck edit:
 
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much better :)

I can crit other peoples work, but alot of the time when im modeling, i cant see the things that are wrong with it, or if i can i dunno how to fix it >< forums are indeed great :)

keep it up, cant wait to see it finished.
 

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I love how it looks so smooth... no crits at the moment...
 

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