Dragonball NG issue 2 OUT NOW!

[ahmed61086]

i said the drawings need to be more angular, and in that respect that the noses are too circular, it means the same thing i just wanted to get a lil bit specific...but what does my opinion count for anyway right?

 

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DAVID! LOOK AT UR PM!! IVE BEEN TELLING U TO LOOK ALL DAY!

 

[ESF-addict]

Oh I have a question Dave like When Gokan and Teck (I think ) are sparring with Vegeta are they just messing around or something? Because that Villian ownes SSJ4 Vegeta And one of the SSJ3 puts up a fight.

 

[Evil_Trunks]

Wangster: There was no need to post that in response to Naraku. Let the mods handle offenders. If someone flames you or you feel the need to flame someone in response to a flame. DONT. It will only get you in trouble as well.

And Ahmed: I know you're new. But do try not to double post. Just click the

button. and edited your previous post. Thanks in advance.

 

[Skiwan]

{-S-T-S-} i tried to pm u, but it sed ur inbox is full,

ahmed61086, i know what you mean about angular, ive been trying to work on that, issue 2's alot better, i thought, what go you mean about the noses? cuz i usually draw 2 sides of a triangle,

ESF-addict, well thats cuz the bad guy isnt using his full power yet, like in dbz, perfect cell dont show his full strength till he fights gohan...

 

[Naraku]

YES WOOOOHOO i got a warning yes just what i wanted giving CRITS IS NOT INSULTING DAVE and how did i get a warning anyways .....AND HOW THE ummm something DO I POST ARTWORK

 

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davidskiwan - its empty! i emptied it before i sent u the pm...try PMing again...if that doesnt work - [email protected] or icq: 55911244

 

[owa]

Originally posted by Naraku
1.sucky drawings 2. it wouldnt be NG it would be FS 3.Tech? who made this disgrace to dbz?

DBZ alone is a disgrace. P:lus your just being an annoying Tard.

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I like it m8. I do have one little comment,
I suggest you make it have a big story. Not somthing like this:

All the villains were in Hell and fused together and broke out and are trying to get revenge.

The story I said may not be what this actually is but don't do that, mess around with stuff make it original and make a great story.

Bring Goku back in a cool way, give it lots of drama, add a transformation level besides SSJ, make some baddass pimpin' thing that adds a cool touch, and make it end in away that DBZ wouldn't

I hope I make abit of sense lol.

 

[Evil_Trunks]

Originally posted by Naraku
you know what ? **** you! hahaaha im waaaaaay better than those drawings there nothing...... and umm z-squat? AND DUMBASS HES TRYING TO MAKE THE REAL THING but i never even saw trunks go ssj2 so how the hell is he ssj3

That's a pretty good reason to get a warning. :\

 

[Skiwan]

well i have a good story all planned out and it is gonna be longer, the next issue should be good....

 

[Arthos]

Hey, It's Arthos Approved.

 

[ahmed61086]

let me explain myself about what i meant about the noses. When u draw them and the character is on an angle or from their profile they look fine. But when u look straight on there has to be shading. Plus the first "triangle" closest to the eybrows shouldnt realy be a triangle, it should com down the face either straight or with a slight, very slight inward curve depending if u are drawing on an upward or downward angle. Without the shading the nose looks circular and plain. Ill post a few pictures to show u what i mean..when i figure out how to post pictures.

 

[Naraku]

Originally posted by -[ZeniSlev]-
DBZ alone is a disgrace. P:lus your just being an annoying Tard.

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I like it m8. I do have one little comment,
I suggest you make it have a big story. Not somthing like this:

All the villains were in Hell and fused together and broke out and are trying to get revenge.

The story I said may not be what this actually is but don't do that, mess around with stuff make it original and make a great story.

Bring Goku back in a cool way, give it lots of drama, add a transformation level besides SSJ, make some baddass pimpin' thing that adds a cool touch, and make it end in away that DBZ wouldn't

I hope I make abit of sense lol.

oh OH STOP IT om man HAAhahahahah you are so funny actually youre a disgrace LOL and youre saying a word when you dont know what it means and your Incompatence is beyond belief

 

[Evil_Trunks]

Naraku: You just don't seem to understand that flaming isn't tolerated. If you can't say something nice, don't say anything at all.

If I see one more negative comment from you flaming another member I will personally make sure you have a nice two week vacation.

 

[GatSu]

Great Artwork!!!!
Awesome stuff, but Id have to agree with zeni, a little more detail, and it seems a bit rushed, But I can see that more detail means more drawings, which will slow you down. Just something to ponder about, you know.

 

[Maistro]

Well David you still havent awnsert my question is Goku gonna appear to save the day
(you could use my dende's dead story)

Naraku
Damm cant u say anything usefull dont insult his work if u it hate so mutch make youre own.
Hes has put allot off work in it so you could at least give him some good comment ok we agree its not Toyirama but its close he did it on his own a whole isue

 

[Skiwan]

im not saying about goku , but i promise he will make an appearance.............