dbhb's ein!!

[Iyce Da Kidd]

here's the ein skin (a character from dbhb). he is jin's best friend and trainer. by the way catch dragonball hyper dimension (a manga not a mod) on July 20th... *crits*

[credits: azn, cheeseman, and vassago]

 

[Cold Steel]

Show something a little more upclose, i think i'm seeing a flaw, but i'm not sure, by the looks of it, it looks good.

 

[Iyce Da Kidd]

flaw? what do you mean by that?

 

[Cold Steel]

Something that is not looking right. Like i said give a close up so we all can see it a little better.

 

[Iyce Da Kidd]

okeydokey hows this?

ok hows this? i try to give an angle where you can see about everything.. i will get more pics up in a sec...

 

[Cold Steel]

Ok his underarms are too thin for those kind of muscles and the breast muscles are a bit too big. That's all.

 

[Iyce Da Kidd]

can i possibly get anymore crits than Cold Steel

 

[Tassadar]

Well without seeing exactly who Ein is, its hard to crit. Anyway the edits look good, maybe you could edit some DBZ models some day eh? Good job.

 

[Iyce Da Kidd]

yes a crit besides Cold Steel! Ein will be coming July 20th in my manga... ill do dbz models once i get in touch with the guy who's making vegettrunks... i wanna skin him! ^_^

on topic: MORE CRITS!

 

[CM]

L...M...A...O his arms are almost thicker than his upper legs o_0

 

[Marauder]

the chest looks waaaaaaaaaay wrong >_<

 

[Iyce Da Kidd]

hm... all you can do is crit huh Mehdi7777. i dont see you doing anything around here so ill advise you to be quiet.... lalalalala oh yeah

*MORE CRITS*

 

[CM]

thats because i have a life, and i also have a job making sprites for project fw, and i also lead project: total conversion, which i make sprites for everyday. if you cant take crits then dont ask for them.

 

[Iyce Da Kidd]

sprites wow... all you have to do is draw a single picture of lines in different colors.. oh well enough about him "MORE CRITS"

 

[ZuL]

Ok, you want crits?

The hair goes back, but it seems all too flat and spiky if you look at it from the side. It may be meant to be that way, but it looks a bit odd...

The pecs ("breast muscles") goes too far down. This should be easy to fix.

His crotch area should also be slightly bigger. It looks like some pants from the sixties; tight up and baggy down, this should also be easily fixed.

Chin to jaw is too spiky, it could use a bit of work.

Thumbs are hardly thumbs at all; just small sticks pointing out. Give the man some decent thumbs!

Also, it may just be me, but the shoulders seem way too bulky if you compare to the arms themselves.

 

[Iyce Da Kidd]

okeydokey zul well put... by the way why are you looking at his crotch... lol j/p. ill be sure to fix that. and nice sig Zul

 

[Ultimate Saiyan]

nise model maybe i coud host for ya

 

[Iyce Da Kidd]

ok ultimate saiyan... pm me your contact... (aim, or msn)

 

[Sentient]

One of his feet is almost round :S
The other one looks fine though..
Other than that.. nothing that hasn't been said before..