DB:S Oozaru

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this is an oozaru model i put together for dragonball source. crits and comments are welcome...
 

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  • The ears need to be pointed and long.
  • The four pointed teeth need to be longer.
  • The finger nails need to be longer and pointy.
  • The arm hair needs to extend to the knucles.
  • The hair color should be darker.
  • The toes need to be longer/the feet need to look like hands.
  • The snout needs to be thinner.

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Does the Oozaru have facial expressions and actions assigned to it yet? You should open the model up in Face Poser and take some screenshots of different expressions.
 
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Ne0TeK said:
He looks like ALF



Raise his nostrils higher

xD QFT!

just what they said, you use a normal map aint you? happy fixing.
 
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Okay:
Wireframes?

The Deltoid's run right into the rest of the arm, which is an anatomy issue which helps to throw off the rest of the torso.

The feet are way too long. Not only that, but they don't look like monkey/Oozaru feet. Monkey's feet should have longer phalanges, almost like their fingers. You've got them more like toes on your model.

The ears neeed to be more pointed.

The tail looks like its a separate object from the model. If its not, then that's probably due to the fact that the tail only has four sides. Round it out, its not like you don't have the polygons to spare.

Hand's have the inverse problem of the feet. The fingers are too long . . . actually, judging from where the fur ends, the entire hand looks way too long.

The texture map is to blurry. Either its a really tiny pixel size, or there's just no real definition of the fur. Try to use a harder brush setting. This tutorial will help you a great deal.
 
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ALF! hahaha damnit... lazy aliens have invaded my artistic abilities.

anywho... pics are updated... you no longer see alf.

stuff left now are texture issues
 
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K, wtf,why is his right arm longer then his left one :shocked:
 
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movento said:
K, wtf,why is his right arm longer then his left one :shocked:

xD LOOOOOl actually hes right lol.
 
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oh god... how did that happen? haha... oh well simple remirror should fix... even though i am positive i didnt make any edits while he was mirrored and pasted back together... i musta been high.
 
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wow.. looks awesome.. That's the best oozaru model I have ever seen! keep up the good work:yes:
 

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