lol, then u dont understand the wp...
the render isnt much...its only the big thing in the middle, he gave me his render and i edetid it at a friends house with some turtorials that i found...
the light beam and sparkels, i made...that isnt a psrt of the render...and the at the top part of the render i made
It seems a little confused to me. The render is nice, and the basic positioning isn't too shabby, but there's a lot going on that doesn't seem to relate to anything. My first reaction was that the type looks awful, what program mangles text like that? My second rection was, if a song is going to be the focus of a piece, why not make the lyrics legible? Another thought on that, I read through the lyrics and it seems like a very sad song. I haven't heard it so correct me if I'm wrong in my guess. But I don't really feel sadness in this, I get anger and confusion from the imagery. That seems inconsistent. And again I have to ask why the tiny text and random lines? I think you're on the cusp of something here, but you need to pull a few things together to make it work.
k ill explain:
the song isnt sad, the song im talking about is a remix made by dj.david geatta,i saw the its clip on mtv, and if u did 2, you would have seen how my wp erlates to it.
now i know there are some things that dont relate, but its just to make the work abit more inmteresting....
and the lirics of the remix have only 10 words...lol.
go dl it, nice song
thank your for the crtz, good or bad guys