Come Crit My first Model (W.I.P)

[VideoJinx]

Hey everyone, ya im getting into modeling too and wanted to post my first model for some crits

I'm still working on it =)

 

[yopyop]

Seems to be not that bad.... may post some wires?
^_^

 

[VideoJinx]

I defined the Abs and Chest a bit more. =)

Current Progress:

 

[Lord Killmore]

looks fine for your first model a lot better than my first models xD
kepp it up.
maybe post some wires n stuff

 

[SS_gohan44]

nice for a first one, used the same ref for my first one fix the part under the abs at the bottom that looks like /|\..fix that and it'll be all set

 

[VideoJinx]

Help x.x trying to smoothen this model out, could someone help ?

 

[zeldalink]

ok dude first up great job on your first model seriously looks great

now for some Criticism

never make polygons any bigger then 4 vertexes (never make a square thingy with more then 4 points) it might not turn up to well 3 and 4 points are the way to go ^^

other then that i got nothing but good things to say your realy good for a beginner now keep doing the good work and keep posting ^^

 

[Growler]

Just making the body fit the shape of the ref doesn't make a good model. I made a little sketch of how the poly flow should run (imo) to help make a good result.

 

[VideoJinx]

Thanks Guys,

I appreciate the tips, and that "Reference Draw-Over" was very helpfull. The way i made it is similar, but it looks like i made too many dotz around the abs and in his waste section

 

[Fallen Angel]

looks cool man

hey jinx.. you did a good job.. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ervaMPt4Ha0

 

[VideoJinx]

More Progress(Please Post Your Crits):

Front:


Back:


Currently Working on the sides, and I plan on editing the front and back more(Mostly the backside).

 

[Ravven]

If you want people to crit post some front/back/right(or left) wires!

 

[Almighty_Gir]

i have some better anatomical reference, be warned though, you can see the skinless mans penis o_o

 

[VideoJinx]

WoH! AWSOME REFS xD JUST What ive been looking for >=)


well im going to restart and make an Even better model with even better poly flow xD thanks alot for these refs xD.

I was just wondering if you have a Female Ref too?

 

[Lord Killmore]

lol thx onslaught . i was looking for those refs since i saw them on the Polycount boards xD

ANd jinx. thats really good so far. just follo the new refs and try to work on the flow and youll get a great body there ^^

 

[Almighty_Gir]

yeah i can't post my wip model here for a guide on polyflow at the moment, cos it has a penis hahaha.

i'll get round to editing bits out later for an example of how i worked around the refs.

just remember though, the ref has like 0% bodyfat, which is unrealistic. use it as a guide, but pad it out a little.

 

[Zabuza2k]

oh my god nice work plz can u make a video tutorial PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ:shocked: :shocked: :shocked: :shocked: :shocked: :shocked:

 

[elcor]

yeah male video tutorial , i need , i hope that you make this for the forum , i ask it for sv but he doesnt like make

 

[ShadyD]

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[VideoJinx]

3 to 4 days, but i sent most of my time figuring stuff out x.x