Cloud Strife Chibi wip lol

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Bleh.



Need major help with it. Harshest crits will be taken (as always :D )

And for all you people going OMG BUT CLOUD IZ TOO HOT TO BE CHIBI, then im tryna form my own style. Sadly, im failing atm, but still. Plus, he's not sad, i just need eyebrows.
 
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make his face more round and no sharp, move his eyebrowns up, and remember, small body, big head , long hair and big shoes as hands.
 
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yeah he looks too much like ichigo xD
increase hair volume! =)
 
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Update!

Leg is not finished, and shoes will be as big as head, give or take a few cm. Hands will be too.

 
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Hm.. will adjust proportions. However, I'm kinda going for a half-chibi...
 
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And for all you people going OMG BUT CLOUD IZ TOO HOT TO BE CHIBI, then im tryna form my own style. Sadly, im failing atm, but still. Plus, he's not sad, i just need eyebrows.
you realize that the cloud on the original PS1/PC game was already in chibi style.....(i meant the one walking around.., not battle or cinematic cloud)

but i woldn't mind seeing a bit high poly version =)
 
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Update.

Shoe is unfinished, hand is WIP.

I gotta fix the face somehow, he looks sad D:

 
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Update.

Shoe is unfinished, hand is WIP.

I gotta fix the face somehow, he looks sad D:

He looks terrified on the right :3
 
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hair should be a lot larger compared to the head =o
 
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still think it should be bigger (otherwise make hair bigger or head smaller) =o do u have a front and side view?
 
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hmm you see that the hair hides the sides of the face, and that it almost only the face is seeable and not the head. i would suggest to reorder the hair.
The hands look really strange, might look up the realistic hands up, you might wil get what i mean, yours look blocky.

the place between the chin and the neck need to get up.

the straight pose doesnt look very well, might move the legs abit back?

thats it, i wish i would have more pics of chibi cloud.
 
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Yeah.. the hair is like, tons hard to do, but I'm kinda too lazy to learn alpha mapping.



Tweaking time. Crotches are insane to make >_>
 
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not really ;)

anyway hands are wrong, the thumb is like the biggest part of the fingers, make the fingers smaller and shorter on abit (not much)

if you compare your model with the artwork you may see that cloud has a tinny neck, and a very long ending (above) of the shirt and long legs.
 
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wires of the head plz, atm cant really see where the sad look is coming from (poly-flow most likely) and he looks so much like ichigo =/
 
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[REMOVED LOL]

Finished head skinmap. As you can see, it wont be as uniformal as Ichigo.

Going for a soft shade. And that hair is a test, its not final.

Nearly finished main part of face, not the whole head. Gotta add more dark tones, he looks too pale imo.

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Finished head skin. The neck is horrendous, but its late in the night...




 
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hmmm its a nice wip, you should work on, you shouldnt aim for a style, just work on it :) it wil come out nice i gues.

though the eyes are very squary.
 
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Make him more like your av :p
just pupils and a nose =P
 

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