chibi trunks model done

[Just-a-guy]

yay! I've just finished my crappy ;D trunks model
but, well, it's my first, so....
credits: NONE!
pic here:

I've fixed the head after I made this pic so it WILL be smaller

it just needs skinmapping and skinning
if you want to skin this crappy model, PM me

*don't rip or clone (right, like any1 wants to)*
I don't need crits, it's done, and I know it's crap, but I won't change anything

 

[Sicron]

well sorry i have to say, it but crappy it is lol
(i dont care if u dont want crits i give em anyway)

Pants need to be baggier
hair needs to be bigger on the sides (front view/next to his ears)
arms to shirt connection looks kinda weird

 

[Just-a-guy]

hmmmm....you're kinda right there
I'll fix it anyway

 

[The_Prophet]

I agree, pants need to be baggier and the hair can change.(How about hair like the trunks in your sig?I know this is chibi trunks but his hair is basicly the same) Just my crits, take em or leave em

 

[Just-a-guy]

well, I must say I'm not good at ssj hair

 

[The_Prophet]

Well at least try or ask someone else is you can use their hair.

 

[Just-a-guy]

I'm not going to use someone else's hair, the model will be 100% mine, and if anyone want other hair on it, HE can do that

but as I said: I NEED A SKINNER!

 

[ScepterOfTruth]

ummm...keep practicing. hair needs to be wider. not the spikes but it looks more like a mohawk then anything else.

 

[Vegeta_Rulz]

errrmmm i cant c the pic

 

[Just-a-guy]

then copy and paste http://ahost.free-host.com/done.jpg

 

[Vegeta_Rulz]

when r u gonna release it but any ways i cant evan c it

 

[Sicron]

(http://www.animeadrenaline.com/dragonball/trunksgoten.jpg)

He is older here, but the hair is practicly the smae

(http://archive.ncsa.uiuc.edu/edu/students/jwhicker/Images/Trunks_pics_2/Trunks-cry.jpg)


those are soem good refs

 

[Just-a-guy]

better?

I can't make the hair more detailish, I'll have to edit all the hair, and I'm too lazy...
maybe I'll do that too some day
but for now: I NEED A SKINNER!

 

[Vegeta_Rulz]

i cant c any of yr models

 

[ShatteredForte]

ill skin it for u send it to [email protected]

 

[CrackerJack]

sorry to say, but its pretty bad, no matter what the detail, or the skin, that model cant be fixed so it looks good. Pants detail sucks, arms are just tubes with no defenition, hair is just 4 poly spikes, and the chest is flat, no difference bettween the chest, and shirt.

Sorry to tell you this, or be harsh but if you go show this model and sos, or EF, you will get so many flams and bashes, it wont even be funny. You see, here in ESF, people think a circle is 1337. The only people that I think can give you really good critze on this forum is Boltey, smo, Darksun, and Nuttzy. the teamembers as well, and some other people, but thats really it.

 

[Iyce Da Kidd]

yeah.. i agree with cj like 100 percent

besides the good credits part.. i dotn think im leet guy.. i kinda suck..

ansywayz

hair is off.. it has no resemblance to trunks whatsoever

shirt looks like a cynlinder just edited to a shirt but couldve been more then that there and its too far up.. trunks shirt does show his chest

arms are cylenders as well and the hands are a bit off.. just use one of the esf models hands for a ref

lower body is good but boots are a little off as well

overall i give it a 4/10

 

[Styer101]

You need to put alot more detail into the model... make every muscle of trunks' pop out like i am not trying to brag but take a look at my vegeta model

I am in the same boat as you being a noob

http://styer101.tripod.com/sitebuildercontent/sitebuilderpictures/vegetabodyss.jpg

plus are you using pics as refrences in the background cause that really helps

 

[Just-a-guy]

well, I'm a total n00b at player modeling
I can make pretty good weapon models, but no player models ;(
I'll re-do the hair and some parts then

 

[preddie45]

legs r like...bent. it isnt great