Well, first off. Hsu is right. I shoulda been nicer to you MaX. Today I was kinda pissed and acting like an *******. So Im sorry. Second off my scanner is broken so i couldn't show my work atm, but i will in later days. Thirdly, Im going to admit, there is lots of improvment that could be done to that picture and I'm sure you do have the potential.
One thing is the body. The beams coming from either his side or his back (looks like its supposed to be hitting his back, but seems like his side cause his arm's proportions.) and yet, hes going the other way. Try and get body proportians right (I think hes facing the side of our point of view, so only part of one arm should be visable, in which both arms should be back because the blow is coming from his back and hes being pushed forward.) Legs should be back. Proportions and such takes a long while to perfect, but with practise you can.
If your aiming for an anime style, then there are tons of people that can help you here. If you like your style, stay with it and grow
Just remember practise! And dont rush your drawings! Take time.
And the feet look like uhh... elf slippers (without the jingle bell)?
And the elbow bends are off
(elbows should be right at the waist (If body straight, arms down completly, body stiff), so if you have a good imagination and can interpret the body in 3D from there.)
The armor... looks like a shirt with a design to have armor on it.
I know, I can be a hard critic I'm told, but critisism helps us grow. Hell, Im critisized almost every hour by my brother.
Now pay attention to the style your trying to draw in. Take some examples and look at the features and detail in the work. Use reference pictures to boost yourself. Keep a high ego (but not too high) about your work and use it to help you strengthen your skills.
If your not aiming for an anime style, pay almost no attention to my details of my crits, and pay attention to others'. If you aiming for a whacked up cartoon of sorts like Dilbert-style dbz, then have fun and mess around.
I know you have the potential to be an excellent drawer, so keep on drawing and one day you could be like Akira Toriyama. Or Scott Adams.
[EDITs]I've edited the text a bit. Gave more crits and encouragment, and some ideas.[/EDITs]