Cel-Shaded Gotenks!

[jp]

Here ya go:

The lines are much thinner...almost too thin, tell me what you think..
the pants have been re-done, and look much better in my opinion..

I'm playing around with the ssj hair atm..I'm not quite happy with it.

Abolutely awsome!!! the lines are way good!! you could try make them a little thicker, but i think its a huge improvement over the first lines!!

This is gonna be the best cell shaded model for esf
:yes: imo ofcourse

 

[Ryeko]

I think the lines are too small, hard to notice not close up, and then doesn't looks cel-shaded.

 

[SS_Cloud]

Yeah, I set the lines at 0.01, I'll post up some comparative renders of 0.02..maybe up to 0.04 and you guys can vote on it

 

[TwisteR]

You should try to clean up those lines on his chest to, they look kind of blurry.

 

[SS_Cloud]

here's a comparison between the two lines thickness' I'm thinking about using..

the first one is 0.02 and the second 0.03

 

[Eisberg]

2...i like it better

 

[Ryeko]

2 is much better.

 

[Growler]

ok, he needs to have much more pronounced eyebrow bones...

 

[Mr. Phonso]

definatly 2

 

[Blademaster]

i say 2!! first the worst second the best!!! oh yea lol

 

[MajinDruu]

i say 2!! first the worst second the best!!! oh yea lol

¬_¬'
Also , your sig sucks...

Anyway , Yeah 2 looks better than 1.
However the more you "clean him up" the less Cel shaded he looks...

 

[guest]

aww drew cmon, it dose suck yes, but theres no need to say so :/ thats just offensive, and off-topic.

wow man, cloud that looks brilliant id say num 2 looks best!

 

[PiXel]

umm i dotn see a big change... anyway... i got crits on the skin!

the eyes... the look funny and the eyebrown too lol nvm more!

 

[jp]

Lol yeah, that siggy sucks big time.... ooops :fight: , but it wasn't nice to say that.

ontopic

I vote for 2, its good

 

[TwisteR]

¬_¬'
Also , your sig sucks...

That was uncalled for, at least he has a signature, instead of two pictures of Brolly.
Try to keep those to yourself, it only causes trouble.

 

[Growler]

try and make the brow bone more noticable either with a shade or darken the line and make it longer

Also, when are you going to release this cel-shaded version for download?

 

[ReCkOninG of FirE]

sscloud, about the skin, i think the belt should go something like this

not straight across but u will c what i mean in the pic.

btw number 2 is much better, gj, hope u release it soon!

 

[jp]

Dude... that isn't skinning anymore, that means he needs to change the entire belt modle...

Naw don't do that, just leave it like it is, its good! don't mess it up by ruining the model.

 

[ReCkOninG of FirE]

Dude... that isn't skinning anymore, that means he needs to change the entire belt modle...

Naw don't do that, just leave it like it is, its good! don't mess it up by ruining the model.

Huh, sorry i don't get you jp, its the skin hes working on not the model, hes not allowed to touch the model cause its kreshis. You can just back up the skin and change to way the lines going on the skin thats all. if i misunderstood you then i apologize. sorry

 

[jp]

Well as i understand you want to have the piece that is out if the belt at the front.... but that would mean he needs to touch me model... not the skin, and putting that there would look odd, since the end of the belt would be at his side, yet the skin shows its in front?...

Maybe i am confused.. my apologies for that :fight: