Actually Pommy, I really did like the typography in the first one. You had a nice mix of sizes and alignments, and very few people experiment with that here. The font in the first is better I think as well because there is enough contrast in its style for it to stand out, but it retains that digital feel that would accompany a digital flame. My only suggestion for it would be to adjust the sizing on "Burned" so that the left side of the "B" lines up with the left side of the "G" in "light".