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heh ;'D thanksy
Phew =o and now that it's all back to normal =]

dendza said:
torso and pants are two different things when depth is in mind
maybe you can try to lighten the torso (folds shadow)
ahh yeah, i know what you mean, had some probs with that =/... but ill try to sort it out =P.

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I dont really like the skintone, too pink for me.. but thats up to you
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The model is looking sweet, if not a little pink.
i kinda like the skin tone ^_^ but if you both say so then you're probably right, ill try to play with it a little, and see where it goes =D

Teen Gohan is really popular these days. :D

Looks awesome SV, will u make Cel Shade, coz i love it.

Love all ur celshade works. ;)
thanks man =] actually that gohan model is pretty old, just new skin.
and no cell shading this time ;P got Zeq2 where i should focus more on cell shading there.

awesome stuff SV, i like the reskin much better than it was =P more definition = secks ^_^ the only thing i think needs changing is the ssj hair is a bit orange :eek:
YAY thanks David =]
yeah the hair is a little too orange i guess XD ill make sure to do somefing about that too :smile:

SV, please have my babies.
Anytime Kama =O


thanks all =] keep the C&C coming =D update coming soon.
 
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I think he looks almost perfect, just great, I think the SSJ hair should be brighter, though, and less orange-ey. Other than that, it's awesome, the face looks exactly like him. :3
 
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Update:
fixed what most of you said, skintone, shirt folds, cheeks, hair-tone and some other small tweaks.



gonna start on ssj2 now =]
 
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looking slick SV, i love the new skintone, and im eagerly awaiting SSJ2
 
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The updates look secksi, keep it up. :yes:
 
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Trés bien monsieur Super Vegetto. Le Gohan Cest trés bien.

I love the new skintone, keep it up, and BTL is guaranteed to be a succes =]
 
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Cold Steel said:
Trés bien monsieur Super Vegetto. Le Gohan Cest trés bien.

I love the new skintone, keep it up, and BTL is guaranteed to be a succes =]
:3 I would have to agree on that. This model, like many other BTL things I've seen so far, are quite impressive. I believe that with enough effort, BTL can grow to be most excellent. :yes:
 
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Too much tones of orange in the hair left if you ask me. It should just generally be more pale.

Also the shoes and ankles aren't very detailed
But you know i love it man. Great muscle structure, though slightly too defined for a kid.

Oh and can we see a side shot i want to check something.
 
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Super Veggeto said:
gonna start on ssj2 now =]
O RLY?

Fix that thing in the middle of Gohans pants ;_;
Other then that I love it :E
 
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The_Real_Legend said:
Too much tones of orange in the hair left if you ask me. It should just generally be more pale.

Also the shoes and ankles aren't very detailed
But you know i love it man. Great muscle structure, though slightly too defined for a kid.

Oh and can we see a side shot i want to check something.
i agree on the hair, shoes and ankles crits, on the arms...basicly, when gohan fought cell, he had that level of muscle, i can get some refs if you want.

sure, here's a side shot =]


dReAm KiLlEr said:
O RLY?

Fix that thing in the middle of Gohans pants ;_;
Other then that I love it :E
what thing? =O... *confused*
 
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Awesome job SV, I disagree with Legend though, I think the orange tones give the hair a lot more depth, it looks really nice as it is now.

Can't wait to see what you come up with at SSJ2, I'd really like to see you add some battle damage for his second form.

:yes:
 
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the ears are way too small and positioned wrong, made ya a drawova:



thats my only crit atm, looks cool ^_^.
 
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Made ya a drawover too (2 actually ^^) I didn't follow any refs or anything but it's what I think.

It's just easier to explain in Hebrew...
btw feel free to correct me if I'm wrong and SV don't trust me too soon :fight:
 
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if u wright in a different language, ure supossed to say english too..

looks good so far
 
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I think you should be able to understand what I meant by what I marked... anyways I told him that in the side view the feet look like socks (imo) and in front view the points I marked stick out too much.
About the hair, I just drew what I thought the head/hair should be limited to.
Was it that hard to tell that's what I was saying?
 
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humm good crits guys =]
i agree about the ears (NT's crit) and the head shape (Orbit's crit)
but im not sure about the shoes...they are shaped good, and those parts that stick out too much just look like that from the front, it actually gives more shape in perspective.

thanks though =] ill follow the rest.

I'd really like to see you add some battle damage for his second form.
maybe ill make a battle damaged version for ssj2, just maybe ^_^"
 
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@nighterror, keep in mind that the head is slightly rotated forwards, so the only thing wrong with te ears is the position ;)

nice work SV, though i think the ankles are to thick, they kinda buldge outwards.

btw Orbit, please give critz in english, other people would like to be able to read the also ;) ( oops didnt see crackerjacks reply :p )
 

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