Brolly (normal) WiP

[Imp.GuranGa]

Ka.. Ka.. Kakarotto !!!

Made a Brolly for practice don't know If it would be for a game ore something and I hope I can finish it but I think I can because I stoped smoking and Blowing so I have a lot of free time to spare :yes:

Btw the PC is: 693 (hl2 engine I think if it's going to be for a game)
the back isn't modeled jet

[img=http://img218.exs.cx/img218/4933/back4if.th.jpg]

 

[Almighty_Gir]

ay man thats actually pretty good youve got the basics of a really good flow going, just try to add a few more cuts to make it less blocky, and your onto a winner. also, while you shouldnt worry about the count too much, no matter what engine its for; try for as low a count as possible. make every vertex count for something.

 

[Imp.GuranGa]

I have cut allot but I make it more smoother when I finish the back..
But Thank you for your comment and your tutorial ( not the picture and steps but the style of modeling )

-------- Update --------------

Since no one is responding on this thread :\ , I have a update
Faces: 1468
Still need to make the shoulders but dont know how brolly's shoulders look
Maybe I need to look at Budokai 3

[img=http://img211.exs.cx/img211/9554/update9gh.th.jpg]

 

[MajinVegeta Tim]

looking good so far, keep it up

 

[DiZ]

well...the right part of is skirt should cover the left part a bit

 

[Imp.GuranGa]

Jeah I know but its mirrored doing that sometime during the proces

 

[DiZ]

o, so lets hope that you can skin like you can model

 

[PiXel]

wow,Did you modeled once befor?
Just nice, pretty nice
i think you will have some probs with the hair... "I think"
but lets see how u´ll do it

 

[Mr. Phonso]

looking nice, love that red this taht goes around his waist!

 

[Imp.GuranGa]

Made a Update

- The back is made (still not what I want )
- The taht is now unmirrored
- Leg inprogress maybe redoing those (only like the back of it )

Faces are now 1291




TryForce:Jeah I model a long time but since a month ore 2 I'm using Max
before I jused Milkshape and I disliked my work so I didn't post much

 

[Mr. Phonso]

taking shape ^_^ although i would fix the back folds on the pants

 

[DiZ]

i dont see what's wrong with the back.....but if you say so

 

[PiXel]

*second tht what DS said*
And he got no elbows!

Can I ask you what ismore difficult for you?
Milkshape3d or 3DSM
It can be that you ´re using 3dsm because it got better graphic but its difficult to use... Just a question

 

[zeldalink]

frankly a ok but i only got one coment: ahum "SMOORTH GROUP ON OR OF " looks good hope to see a gooood head

 

[True-Warrior15]

im not trying to be akward or *** but he needs nipples

 

[Skiwan]

my crits wud be, his upper arms are slightly too long, and his forearms need to be bulked up a bit, he also needs more of an arse :x he doesnt really have one atm, and the red clothing needs to flare out more its too tight atm, and his trousers need the same treatment, because they look a bit small because i doubt brolly's boots (watever they are) are that big.

I must say it looks pretty impressive though,im impressed, if i was u, i'd try to smooth out the abs a little more, make em slightly deeper and more curved. I also disagree with the pectorials, the screen u used as a ref (just an image i recall looking similar) would be of brolly wen he's about to turn lssj or something and he has both arms out to the sides, well on that screen his shoulders have moved towards the camera and his spine is slightly leaning towards us too, it stretches the pecs to look like that, where as if he was drawn standing in your position his pecks wud be different, the bottom bit of it where it peaks downwards would be more to the side and rounder towards the armpit. also his neck is good but the shape of the muscles that come from the colar bone dont look right, they get bigger near the head and there is 2 attachments to the colar bone, but one is above the other.

I hope my comments help because it does look pretty good, the back, though lacking a little definition is nicely done, which is hard... because no1 remembers the back muscles very well >_>.

anyhows, good luck with the rest ^_^

 

[ReCkOninG of FirE]

I like it alot but i agree with dave's crits, his abs are like flat and his pecs are kinda are

would you mind posting some wires for us, i would love to see the polyflow

gj, keep it up

 

[Imp.GuranGa]

ty Davidskiwan for your great comment when I finisch my other model that I work on I finish this one i think that in a week I'm back on this baby :laff: For now you all just have 2 wait srry...

ps: thank you all for the comment

 

[bile]

you need to fix the smoothing groups on that ... (not very important .. but it buggs the hell outta me )

I dunno if u just used the auto smooth tool or something, but you should just post flat shades untill you put nice smoothing groups on it,

EX : http://www.img-host.info/imgs/8674_good smoothin groups.jpeg

made this a while ago. It has pretty nice smoothing groups on it.

as for the model itself, Looks pretty good sofar, no critz that wernt already mentioned