Brolly in progress =

[.DaN.]

Ok since my prev. tread got closed by my request ( it got spammed all over) i made a new one with nice improovments

Note! Dont spam, in here if you dont have any good crytz to give or show a drawover dont post crap here!

Ok things that are fixed:
New face , (specialy on side)
Iprooved neck ,
Fixed abs
Fixed connection between shoulder and body
Fixed shirt more to a shirt look
Arm muscles fixed
Poly coun lowered ( 1950 polys)

Heres pic : (note: on 3ds max render the model is not snapped together)

+pic of face

 

[Chosen Saiyan]

wow! thats really nice work!
but the mouth needs some work

 

[Nuttzy]

its just now that i got a good side shot of your brolly, that hair is completeley wrong fromthere, (even worse than from the back)


like the super saiyan neck hair you have there, and the front 4 strand thingies, they stick out WAY too far from the front of his head,

make his arm more arm shaped, looks almost like a cylinder from the front, give it some more shape on the front and back



either its his necklace or his entire torso, but thats wayyyy too narrow


his robe looks like its a balloon, it shouldnt bee that "poofy"

and his belt area, looks too large altogether,



(thats about all i can see for now)

 

[.DaN.]

Ok i l fix that thx :smile:

Ok i can understand to fix the robe , but what did you exactly mean by hair

And heh , how to she the arms to be arms if they already look like arms , ?

 

[guest]

i believe what he means about thee hair is that it go's to far back, it shouldnt be on his neck, it should only cover the top of his head

 

[SSJ Toast]

+pic of face

i think you should change his lips, looks like hes ready to plant a big smootch on you ;/

 

[Eon]

Big improvement man, I love it so far.

 

[Suh Dude]

Ok Ultr.. i mean Dan
That one good model and you did it,its finally good!!!!

 

[.DaN.]

Ok Ultr.. i mean Dan
That one good model and you did it,its finally good!!!!

Call me that one more time , and i l punch you to the jaw! :id:

Thx magus i l continue workin on to improove him

Ok fixed the robe a lil on the back still some fixing on the robe

I realy dont know what up with the lips they look realy ok in flat shded

 

[nsw316]

Why does his abs go on op of the robe? Is that how it spose to be?

 

[Cold Steel]

That's where the robe get's tied together.

 

[.DaN.]

That's where the robe get's tied together.

Yes , i am palnning to skin that so it would look like the robe is tied there instead of modeling (almost impossible)

 

[Cruzharo]

Work on the mouth.You always have2 comsintrate on the head cuz thats where you identify the character.

It looks realy good!!

Oh ya and the muscels are a bit small.

 

[.DaN.]

Yeah i m trying to fix the mout but it looks like its already fixed dunno

Hmm muscles , well i wont make him like king cong , i l make lssj or ssj , with normal muscles i dont want them to be huge

 

[Cruzharo]

Ya the muscles could be a bit bigger not too much.
The abs thing freek me out......

 

[Hawki_ice]

Good work Ultra looks great so far

carnt wait to see him finished

and the eyes look wierd

 

[.DaN.]

Abs , hmm tryed makin em wider = and now they are wider , but i l try to make em more wider ,

-but if you mean that they go in the robe thats because the robe ties there-

 

[Humpie]

ULTRA try makin the smile evil or sumfing =o
or just take away the mouth and add it when skinning it o=

 

[UsSj BrOlLy]

it looks fantastic but I think that his eyes are a bit to big (they go all the way through to his ears)

 

[.DaN.]

Belive me eyes are ok i did em of ref :]