Boredium

[Death The Jedi]

Boredium v.2

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/3848419/

**EDIT** Update, version 2

 

[Alteh]

nice job

Hmmmmmmmmmmmmm. That is pretty cool ! you can tell its your first in a while because its kinda plain

 

[Suh Dude]

erm yeah..... its cool...but can use more shape and stuff.and i already see that you are improving. i'll give it a 5/10. I havent seen a bryce render for a while.

 

[Judge]

the topright is just very nicely done, I love that part. very clean etc,.

but the bottom left part is a bit too static (the cubes or something), it doesnt really fit with the rest. I think that ruins the pic a bit.

but overall, nice job.

 

[Death The Jedi]

...the bottom left part is a bit too static (the cubes or something), it doesnt really fit with the rest. I think that ruins the pic a bit...

Thanks for the critz Judge... any suggestions as to what I should do to the bottom left? It looks rather empty if I take out the squares (I can show you a render of that if you'd like..), but I was thinking maybe take those out and add some 2D work

 

[X-iT_W0uN|)]

I think the 2d work is a good idea. It would really spice up that empty piece. So go and do it and post the result so we can see :laff:

 

[GhostfaceKillah]

Hmm my DA comment wasnt too nice... , but it just doesnt appeal to me..

 

[Death The Jedi]

Updated with Version two, got rid of the nasty squares..

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/3848419/

 

[Judge]

I think it looks a lot better now, its at peace with the environment. btw looks like the shapes are 2 eyes, watching eachother , a mother and a child somehow came to mind. I like it

 

[Death The Jedi]

yay! My art is liked ^_^ :laff:

 

[X-iT_W0uN|)]

That's much better. I Like the lighting btw