Booya, latest Ryoko drawing (no cg yet)

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Hit me with the crit!
 
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crit #1. you spelled hit wrong lol
2. well ive told you em already :p
 
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OK i'm gonna give my honest crits:

1. The eyes are wonkey, i.e. not in the same place on the face.
2. The ears are wonkey
3.Try curving the front bangs a bit
4.Shoulders are too curved upwards
5.The arms don't look too good.

Well overall I don't like it much, it just looks a little dis-proportionate.
 
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I think the face is too bland. The nose looks too far away for the angle in proportion to the mouth and chin. And the shoulders and arms are just bad. Not one of your better drawings.
 
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I agree that the chest and arms need to be more defined, and more details!
 

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