bojack trunks

[zeldalink]

C&C ?? put like 2 hours of work into this

 

[Kurachi]

it looks great so far .. yeah :yes:

 

[zeldalink]

thx annymore crits ?

 

[guest]

the chest boobs look sqaure, but i cant see much on that render, too many shadows in the way

 

[Eclipse]

looks very very good.......so far, but that shouldn't have taken you 2 hours =\.

 

[Almighty_Gir]

the image is very blurry....any chance of a flatshaded render? can crit better then...the only thing i would say is to bring the chest muscles in so that the gap is a little tighter.

 

[Enix]

its actually very good, and stuff like that DOES take 2 hours, especially when you take ur time to make sure everything is nice and perfect. Good job.

 

[Skiwan]

>_< LOL "chest boobs" they're called pectorials , anyway, the pecs should be a little lower and smoother join in the middle, its looking good though, it'll be good to see more, but it'd be nicer to see a flat shadded sharper render

 

[Almighty_Gir]

^^^ thats what i meant haha, and i didnt say boobs i said muscles i think u have something on ur mind dude...

 

[MajinZGohan]

lol gir, he's talking about fortnox. Great job, but let's see a sideview.

 

[Almighty_Gir]

hehehe ok my bad sowwy im still waiting for a flatrender

 

[Johnny]

um looks ok... Just keep workin on it

 

[Mr Smo]

2 hours is along time 2 make that IMO, but at his early modelling level its a real good job like clipseh said.

It'd take people like clipseh about 10 - 15 mins 2 do something like that. but it doesn't mater cos it all comes with practise.

 

[Eclipse]

On second glance the hole for the arm in the jacket looks way too small, and I think you should make the neck a bit thinner too, I'm not sure if i'm thinking of the same trunks that you are modeling but i don't remember his next being that bulky.

Awwww smo u so kind 2 poor ole me ::blushes:: =*.

 

[Darkone]

Yeah looks realy nice m8 , yeah but 2 hours is a bit long , but the result looks ok

 

[zeldalink]

ill make a new rendere i chaged his boobes and im tweeking the neck atm ill show a flat smooth front and side


edit: smooth

flat

 

[guest]

7331 GJ, but yea the *ahem* pectorials look sqare, try moving them around a lil to make it more chest-looking

 

[DarkaGe|SSJ]

hey dude, how do you model a clothes on top of another, im guessing poly by poly, could you plz tell me how

 

[zeldalink]

thx fort will do and to you darkage :
look you first model sumthing and then you just model sumthing else make it so they wil fit into eatchother and presto

(ps i might do an animation where the shirt rips and goos away ( trans anim )
ps the animator will be darkone

 

[-Def-Shinta]

yea ^_^ finally a trunks model (ive been noticing that no1 wants to make him alot)